Immortal_Simo
My name is Tim, or it was until I died. There was no light at the end of the tunnel, no white room... Read more
My name is Tim, or it was until I died. There was no light at the end of the tunnel, no white room to choose any cheats from, nor was there any meeting with God.I didn’t die heroically while saving someone, and I certainly didn’t get hit by a truck. My death was rather stupid and anticlimactic, I had apparently bumped my head while sleeping and passed away…That should have been the end of the road for me, but like many self-proclaimed main characters, I joined the army of multi-dimensional travelers and was reincarnated.Being an avid light novel and manga reader, I would have been excited about the opportunity, if not for my new siblings, who tried to kill me as soon as I was born, or for my mother, who seemed to have a thing for throwing me off cliffs. And let’s not forget my murderous father, who forced me to flatten a small country as my Rite of passage.Oh, did I mention I was reborn as a Dragon? Collapse
Character Growth, Dragons, Fantasy Creatures, Godly Powers, Gods, Gore, Monster Society, Monsters, Mystery Solving, Mythical Beasts, Non-human Protagonist, Non-humanoid Protagonist, Overpowered Protagonist, Reincarnated as a Monster, Sword And Magic
It's not a story about human in dragon body at all. Just a pure dragon who (sometimes) mindlessly follow it instincts. I don't know what the advantage as a reborn person he have when his siblings have the same intelligence as he is.
Great review from Theodepolis, scribblehubReborn as A dragon is a reincarnation story where a man is born into a family of dragons on another world.Plot and Theme: This is an exploration/slice of life/cultivation story based around a dragon's life. There is exploration of the internal landscape, but its minimal. The strength of the story is in its exploration of the world and the social interactions between dragons and other species.Good points: Its refreshing. The author creates an entire world around the story's protagonist. The story doesn't sugarcoat the Dragon Supremacy culture. The ultra rigid society reminds this reader of Sparta: only the strongest and most fit survive. Everyone else is a rival, a source of food, or a pest. Dragons are not human. They don't have human morals. The reader will find brutality but discovery as well. The protagonist might, eventually, have moments of insanity some will confuse with mercy.Bad Points: The prose and style. I kid you not. The prose is something written with no care to style. It is beyond amateur and more than a little lazy. As/while conjunction abuse, rigid structure, telling vs showing, gerunds, bloating (excessive wordiness for simple concepts), lack of significant description, Point of View bouncing, tense slips, passive voice vs active voice, basic orthography, punctuation, etc. In fact, this work doesn't miss a single bump. It holds on to literary problems like an alcoholic to Jack Daniels.1. As/While abuse. As/while subordinate conjunctions are abused in order to speed the narrative along without care for how many times they are repeated. There are other words out there.2. Rigid structure. The style has a general repetitive sentence structure. 'Subordinate conjunction, Independent clause.'Example: "As I thought about what to do, I started yawning." as opposed to "I yawned and considered my options."Feel the weight of the sentence in your head. It isn't pleasant. This particular style controls most of the narrative. It repetition becomes a problem and might put-off many a reader. If something is important enough to be included in a story (subordinate conjunction), it could be separated into its own independent clause (independent clause).3. Gerunds. I won't teach basic creative writing here. Do a search in Google for "Gerunds in prose." Let's just say that the general rule (and all rules are meant to be broken when one knows what they are doing) is to NOT use them. Gerunds, combined with as/while repetition AND subordinate conjunctions are a pain to read.4. PoV problems. Point of Views are tricky. Most fiction is written in 3rd Person Limited PoV or 1st Person PoV. I've seen, rarely, a well conducted 3rd Person Omniscient PoV that slips through with almost no issues.Example: 1st person: I breathed fire. My right claw rended through eldritch flesh.Example: 3rd Person Limited: Terrac breathed fire. His right claw cleaved through eldritch flesh.Example: 3rd Person Omniscient (Multiple views) : Terrac breathed fire (1). The eldritch horror was terrified (2 and Telling). Sparky the dog wanted to pee (3), but he barked at both the dragon and the eldritch horror with brave stupidity. Unknown to all three of them (Sub conjunction), the loss of any of them would disrupt reality. (Ind. Clause). (God/Author PoV)An author must try to limit 3rd Person Omniscient to subtle shifts, otherwise it feels clumsy and harms a story's pacing.5. Telling vs showing. Yes the story has this problem in spades. Telling is direct and (if not given enough thought) lazy. Showing is INDIRECT. It is also, in most cases, wordier but builds better, flows better.Example Telling: Adeline was cold.Example showing: Adeline shivered.Example showing with details: Adeline shivered despite the heavy winter coat.6. Began to. Started to. Seems to. Appears to. I might despise As/while subordinate conjunction abuse but "began/started to/seems to" bloating and ambiguity is up there. These phrases are used by authors to organize their thoughts. They are unnecessary preambles to other clauses in a sentence. Remove them from the prose except in specific contexts.Example: Terrac began to consider the possibilities of murder as Arnold rambled on, convinced of his own importance.Example WITHOUT the bullcrap: Arnold rambled on, convinced of his own importance. Terrac pondered abject murder.Notice that I used 3rd Person omniscient, but it feels like 3rd Person limited. Terrac observing Arnold. That's subtle manipulation of prose and style. Notice that I removed the as/while conjunction. Notice that the "Began to" preamble is gone. Notice that I am TELLING instead of Showing, but the prose isn't harmed by the choice because one sentence has long phonetic prosody and the other is short and to the point. More importantly, the details provide an understanding of the characters and aren't boring. One is a snotty jackarse. The other might be a snarky SoB or, in truth, a cold blooded murderer. I don't have the patience to detail examples of all the other problems in this work. This isn't a creative writing class. Let's leave this at the point that I am EXTREMELY displeased with the rough prose because the story has great potential. This work can be much, much better.2.5 / 5 stars. Fifty percent. Not high enough to be average, not low enough for complete anonimity.
Amazing review are u a writer or something? If you are I'm interested in reading you work ?.
Not mine my intellect is too low for that xD, I've written whose it is on top of the comment
It is identical to Dragon Who Controls Time
I like mc who are in control of their own action, here mc seems to be heavily influnenced by his instinct so much so that his past life as human have little to no effect. It could just be a stroy of normal dragon and say they gain sentient at birth which would've been more interesting.
I've been seeing many new novels becoming a dragon idk why? Is it a trend now?
It’s always been a trend
True that
Chinese obsession with dragon is as old as japanese obsession with tantacles, american obsession with guns, indian obsession with cow, korean obsession with little sisters.
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the korean one is more sus than japanese ?
Very sus.
Oh shit the last one caught me off guard lmao
Are you the embodiment of knowledge and wisdom?
Quote: DeathseekerNot to worry I found itImmortal_Simo27 days agoNope, as mentioned there, that story is just a draft I already written before Dragon. I’m not working on it now, but merely posting old chapters. Everything is on pause since I’m in the process of moving to another country.Author will posting soon as per above message as someone asked about the new chapter in offical site#argus234#
6/10 above avgAverage score in writing in every front across the board except one. Pacing is done relatively well. However the consistent avg writing has its own charm as this put more enphasis on the story contents instead of tasteless gripes.
Don't know why. But the author flipped the MCs character 180, seeing humans as cancer to be terminated to saying the humans were salvageable race and they have great potential. Like motherf#cker what kind of drugs are on to say that. We're literally killing our own planet, who the humans stays at the top of the food chain. Although can't blame the author for change the way he did a lot of cunts were bitching and moaning about how's the MCs a ungrateful bitch for not putting the humans race on a pedestal in comments. Like just why.....just why. Sigh.........
mcs only a few years old and thats coming from a long lived race, thoughts turn in a dime; perpective constantly rearranging. Some may call it growth but i think its better apt to say mcs perspective has yet to settle.his previous life memory only serves to confuse him, as its made clear he rather abandones them naturally and fully embrace exploration of his current life and priveleges.eg. near the beginning he was taught through circumstance, body language, and attitude that dragons are the best and above everything else by his father and grandfatgers influence. When he meets his grandmother he realize this thought isnt the same for all dragons so his limiter was released and ask himself what he truely thinks. He proceeded in exploring and dropped the heavy emphasis perspective on any particular race and begins to evaluate them himself in a clean slate.
Hello, dragons have bloodline inheritance age is just a number for them
yes but here we talk about the practical execution of both inheritance and maturity for a dragon~Or do we all assume a pop and all young dragons knows the secret of the world immediately and start acting like adult Yodas?Everything has a process, even magic in books. only thing that doesnt have processes is descriptions and anything that happens in cn cultivation novels
The MC is just a human in a Dragon form. At first he was like 'dragons are supreme and above all', but suddenly, after just a few line of dialogue with his grandma, he does a complete 180. He showed no signs of regret or guilt (after wiping out a whole kingdom), or at least not enough to justify the sudden flip in opinion. I guess this is as generic as it gets. 7.5/10
Finally a good/great dragon novel where mc isnt instantly turned into human form power but has a permament dragon from ch 1 to ch 187 with a decent level storyline but it doesnt update
Do you know what happened to updates
Not a clue
Not to worry I found itImmortal_Simo27 days agoNope, as mentioned there, that story is just a draft I already written before Dragon. I’m not working on it now, but merely posting old chapters. Everything is on pause since I’m in the process of moving to another country.Author will posting soon as per above message as someone asked about the new chapter in offical site
Viva01
The world of pokemon is synonymous with young boys and girls going on a journey and facing many... Read more
The world of pokemon is synonymous with young boys and girls going on a journey and facing many challenges. This story is not like that. This story is about a SI coming into one of the most prominent companions of the pokemon world. Unlike other stories, Brock is already established and has gone on his journey. He's faced challenges and returned home to be other people's challenges. Which, there's a lot more to than most people realise.Explore an alternate pokemon universe with an expanded cast and more mature ideals through the eyes of Brock, Gym Leader to Pewter City Gym, and family man. Collapse
Fanfiction, Pokemon, Male Protagonist, Weak to Strong
Yes, just yes.This is such a breath of fresh air. I've read some of the Pokemon stories here to try something different from the usual regressing/transmigrating/reincarnating/cultivation/fantasy novels that have filled my story library. But when they try to make them realistic they often miss the mark significantly and ruin it.But this... This is a well thought love song to the Pokemon world. It blends reality seamlessly into the original charm so that it feels like it comes to life. It's got enough of the gritty side to be just realistic enough to pull off the warm environment evoked by the setting.There is romance, at first it seems like it might be a harem but no, his significant other is not going to be permitting that in just the perfect hint of Yandere fashion appropriate to her character.The MC isn't perfect, but in spite of that he is well enough written that it just feels appropriate without becoming annoying and you can really taste how the transmigrator blended into Brock's original personality.Do yourself a favor, give it a read, it's worth the time spent at least to the current posted chapter 159.
whOA! oh wow, a sincere review? of a decent fanfic?! what happend?
It's really good. Though for me personally, I didnt like it that MC was brock because it messes up lots of things for the anime plot, A rock type specialist isnt my cup of tea either. Story Development- there really isnt much I think. The novel starts when Brock has already established himself, even becoming stronger than champion Lance. Well, his family drama did make it more interesting. Characters- The characters are well thought of. It gives more substance. Even the new brock, just the new personality he has made it interesting. Though I wasnt that much excited because Im not very much interested on a rock type specialist, I still think its very awesome. I hope though that in this story, he doesnt go travelling with Ash. If possible, he travels alone and strengthen his pokemon more because theres so much potential in this story. Wished i could read more. I give it a 4.7/5
Story Development: A 4/5 only because the Background of the World, Quality of Writing and Characters improve it from a 3.5/5. The Story Dev. is eh. It's not slow nor fast but given that this was only published here 28 days ago the Story Development will be slow. Writing Quality: Only thing I can really say is too many words that I forget what's what. Besides that a solid 4/5 at the bare minimum.World Background: Its Pokémon. The rating is whatever you think it is.Character Design: Well...it's Pokémon cant say much about that. So same as above I guess? I do like how we don't start at the beginning of MC's life and rather....maybe almost a year or 2 behind canon? Not to sure about the time but it should be around thereTidbits: I do like how somewhat early on we can see how the MC has affected the world. Plus the relationship MC and Sabrina has is wholesome asf. I SWEAR TO GOD IF THEY DONT GET TOGETHER DESPITE THE AUTHOR CLEARLY DOING THAT
WHY, everyone of these stories coming out of the fanfiction genre has people taking over characters in the series. If you are a fan of these series as the authors portray themselves as CREATE A DAMN OC. They need to stop f#cking up all these series.
Actually, it's a very nice take on Brock's life, how he is to be a Gym Leader, sibling/father of 9 others, an engine for his town, a great trainer, and still find his own place in it all.This Brock is intelligent, not lustful, is realistically a great trainer and gym leader, and a caregiving father figure. So I think the character has been chosen well for this story, nowhere else in Pokemon do you have a character so good to write about, so rich in backstory. The anime just failed him. Here is his rightful story.
Yeah sure but this is interesting is it not? We're not reading MC as Ash any other characters. We're reading MC as Brock a popular and cool character from the Pokémon Franchise. It's interesting to see how everything will play out as MC has knowledgeable of the Games( Strategies and what not), Animes, and the Comics. This also takes place a year or 2 before canon meaning we're in the middle of MC's life which is new
I find the story very enjoyable because it is written well and has an interesting concept of him being a gym leader. The chapters are long and thought out with characters being built up and emotions seeming logical.Thing some people may not like are he has already developed a bit and it takes place after he has already caught a lot of pokemon. He is not really op and their also doesn’t seem to be any R-18 if that is your thing.For a pokemon fanfic its a good one but im not to far yet so it may get worse
I pretty much agree with what this guy said.You can nitpick some stuff about it. For example, there's some power fantasy around the edges, and there's some uneven pacing at parts, but overall its a fun read.I rate it 5 outta 5.
Kewl.
Lise Eclaire
After his first college party, Dallion woke up in a small room without doors or windows. Next thing... Read more
After his first college party, Dallion woke up in a small room without doors or windows. Next thing he knew, he woke up as an “awakened” in a small medieval village in the middle of nowhere. Now all he needs to do is figure what the heck is going on. And what’s the big deal with being awakened anyway?! Collapse
Fantasy World, Level System, Male Protagonist, Strong to Stronger, Sword And Magic, Weak to Strong, LitRPG
Quote: Stomper621Haven't read it myself, but i went to RoyalRoad to read the reviews of it.Summed up: - Magic System is interesting and the author focuses on that a lot.- MC is really bland and an idiot. He makes tons of stupid decisions that make no sense. Horrible deals with no benefit at all, and takes massive risks for no reason.- Seems to not have proper scaling for power. (Apparently a "weak" awakened was able to mind control an entire village, including the MC easily. And it seems that a lot of people have this same "weak" ability, including the MC.All in all, the reviews were decent. Most said that the author focuses on the System and such and that it is interesting. But most complaints were about the MC being an idiot and the plot armor was too much.
booooooring
Who the f#ck reads this ?!? Wtf
Well We Have An Idiot And Foolish Mc......I Tried Reading It At Royal Road But Gave Up.... Despite Mc Being From Earth He To Foolish...I Don't Know How People Read This Novel Up To Chapter 500
Haven't read it myself, but i went to RoyalRoad to read the reviews of it.Summed up: - Magic System is interesting and the author focuses on that a lot.- MC is really bland and an idiot. He makes tons of stupid decisions that make no sense. Horrible deals with no benefit at all, and takes massive risks for no reason.- Seems to not have proper scaling for power. (Apparently a "weak" awakened was able to mind control an entire village, including the MC easily. And it seems that a lot of people have this same "weak" ability, including the MC.All in all, the reviews were decent. Most said that the author focuses on the System and such and that it is interesting. But most complaints were about the MC being an idiot and the plot armor was too much.
System is goodWorld is goodCharcters are shit
Heheheh.... synopsis really is true it's a trash........
Why is the synopsis for all these new novels trash? They just make me not even want to read the novel.
True
Actus
Everybody wants a second shot at life. Many get it - chosen by roaming angels and sent off to... Read more
Everybody wants a second shot at life. Many get it - chosen by roaming angels and sent off to another word full of magic and cultivation, where they can live in ways that could only be dreamed of on earth. Where the only thing that dictated their fate was power. Anyone that met Chance would have agreed that he deserved it more than most.Life isn't that easy. Just like everything else, there are rules and regulations - and Chance didn't make the cut. Not until a lucky encounter gets him a one-way ticket to his future. A world where he can make something of himself. If only Chance hadn't landed in the middle of an endless maze full of monsters salivating for his life. Isolated and lost, the only thing he has to work with is his strange, luck based magic and his determination to finally live a life worth living. Fortunately, he has a whole lot of good Karma built up. Collapse
Battle Academy, Cultivation, Demons, Fast Cultivation, Fast Learner, Magic, Monsters, Overpowered Protagonist, Strong to Stronger, Unique Cultivation Technique, Male Protagonist, Karma
#panic# chapters are only 30 but they are repeated.. please remove duplicate chapters
Thanks!
Rank: B
What is the prerequisite to being a protagonist?Is it Luck?Of course it is. A protagonist wouldn't be a protagonist if he didn't have the plot Armor the thickness of the KfE bank vault.Gleam brings us the MC whose literal power is luck because he ate Cheetos, ...wait, what?!How do you kill your enemies?By making the misfortune befall upon them. Kinda reminds me of Evernight Goddess from LOTM.The MC here is not an Anti-hero type character, in fact he is rather kind and...nice.That's why it's called Karma Cultivator Isekai. MC literally earned a hit from the truck-kun by being nice to Bob, oh, you don't Bob, you will find out real soon.Both the style and grammar is solid. Side characters are great with solid personalities, distinct motives and world building is still in its infancy, so I can't say much there.Actus is a RR author, whose best works are Monster Chef, Steamforged Sorcery and My Best friend is an Eldritch Horror, all of which are currently available on Amazon and Kindle, so as a experienced writer you can rest assured that the book won't be put on hiatus midway.Anyway, this a good read in my opinion 4.3/5So give it a try.
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Becoming a wizard is something that Jerry must attain in order to survive in his new life, and that... Read more
Becoming a wizard is something that Jerry must attain in order to survive in his new life, and that is living in the Marvel World. There would be a greater threat coming to earth, and he needs a way to prepare for that.Fortunately, he was given a System that allowed him to go to the Harry Potter Universe, where he got a letter that he would be enrolling in Hogwarts.Jerry needed to learn a lot of things from Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry and, perhaps prevent such incoming threats in the future with the knowledge and skills that he learned from there? Collapse
Academy, Age Progression, Alchemy, Alternate World, Anti-Magic, Based on a Movie, Calm Protagonist, Caring Protagonist, Character Growth, Cheats, Child Protagonist, Confident Protagonist, Elemental Magic, Fanfiction, Fantasy Creatures, Fantasy World, Fast Learner, Grinding, Heroes, Hidden Abilities, Hiding True Abilities, Hiding True Identity, Magic, Magic Beasts, Male Protagonist, Monsters, Multiple Identities, Mythical Beasts, Overpowered Protagonist, Previous Life Talent, Reincarnated in Another World, Saving the World, Special Abilities, Strong to Stronger, Summoning Magic, Transformation Ability, Transported to Another World, Weak to Strong, Witches, Wizards, World Hopping, World Travel, God Protagonist, Godly Powers, Harry Potter, Interdimensional Travel, Late Romance, Marvel, Righteous Protagonist, Ruthless Protagonist, System
I am currently on chapter 242 .So far I have enjoyed reading this novel. It is not a masterpiece and the quality is quite average, however, it has been really good to me me now that I can't find anything to read, and it reminds me a lot of when I started my journey in Webnovels, this novel gives me a feeling of freshness. :D
Why!? Why do people combine things that DON'T NEED TO BE COMBINED
Well, let's get started with this review. First of all, I would like to point out that I will not talk about the quality of the text or its spelling. My level of English is mediocre and I rely on my friend Google to translate. So I'm the last person who can criticize this kind of thing. I will only speak here about my opinion of the story. We therefore follow Jerry in the Marvel world having a system which allows him to travel to several worlds (HP being simply the first of them). This is a decent fanfiction for those new to the genre or if you want to pass the time. But let's look for what I think are flaws for the pickiest among you.The MC gets strong too fast. Indeed Jerry will travel to several worlds, but each of these worlds will be too weak to constitute a real threat to him. Moreover, many of these worlds are not very interesting.Magic not exploited enough. The MC initially has HP magic, one of the most malleable among the magical universes. I expected more innovation in his magic spells. Too bad that most of the time he just copies existing spells. Magic is as versatile as technology, it's a shame not to exploit this potential.A poorly operated system. The system has no problem in itself, just that it is poorly used by the author. Indeed, the system of this novel simply aims at dimensional transport between different worlds, but also the possibility of consuming points (called Stars in the book) to facilitate the learning of magic. The problem here is that the MC only uses his points when reading books, making Jerry's progress boring to follow. I can't repeat it enough, but in a novel whose theme is the increase in strength of its MC, you have to make his way of progressing in strength interesting to read. For example, between an MC who only reads magic books to become stronger and an MC who must research magic to become stronger, we guess which one is more interesting to follow.A fishtail ending. I understand that Jerry becomes too strong at the end so that it is no longer interesting to follow him having adventures like this. But this is not an excuse to botch an ending. The author could have given us the identity of the person who gave the system to Jerry, there is no need to experience adventure for that. It feels like the author cut the story short before it was finished. Now let's talk about the last problem, a recurring problem with most fanfiction, at least that's my opinion. I'm taking advantage of my review here to talk about it:The MC's personality is not suited to the work used in the fanfiction. Let me explain, there are several types of MC, the selfish, the vigilant, the cheeky, the lazy, the cautious, ... In short, there is no shortage of types. In normal novels, the personality of the MC is adapted to his universe (For example a selfish MC will tend to live in a world where the majority is selfish, the most obvious example are Chinese martial arts novels where everyone world is selfish).But fanfiction works differently. The world used in a fanfiction does not belong to the author. So in principle the author of a fanfiction must adapt the MC personality to the type of universe borrowed in his story. For example, take the world of the anime Fairy Tail, it's a story that promotes friendship and family. If you put a selfish MC in that kind of world, he'll be a stain. Faced with Fairy Tail characters who act out of justice and friendship, an MC who only acts out of profit will seem petty compared to them. And a fan fiction reader will make this comparison unconsciously, and will end up not liking the MC.In addition to seeming petty, this will create a barrier between the MC and the world characters used in the fanfiction. This time let's take the example of Jerry in the Marvel universe. Jerry and a selfish MC type, although he can easily help in a situation, he will rarely do so without being able to gain something in return or if it doesn't earn a star for his system. Result, in a universe where each hero acts in the name of justice, we have Jerry who only acts for profit, he does not save others out of kindness, but only because it benefits him. So, no matter how badass and powerful Jerry is, we compare him to characters like Iron Man, Thor or Captain America, who are weaker, but who are full of ideals and who save others without asking for anything in return. , Jerry comes across as a mean-spirited cheapskate with a narrow view of the world. In short, we are not particularly attached to him. I therefore find that Jerry's personality is not suited to this fanfiction, which I find a shame. In conclusion, a decent fanfiction for those who can accept some imperfection. I think it's an ideal novel to pass the time when you have nothing left to read. I hope I have enlightened you, wishing you a good reading. (I would like to point out that I read the entire novel on another site, so this review was written after my full reading.)
3/10 grammer is mid author only has half baked knowledged on EVERYTHING marvel half backed harry potter half baked everything makes up shit all the time the red stars he uses are inconsistent uses a few hundred each day for and gains hundreds of thousands and yet still somehow runs out 246 chapters in barely anything substantial other then predetirmined shit that everyone knows is gonna happen since its a ff it just sucks
why combine things? Harry Potter is not a part of Marvel
I lifted the levitation spell I gave up on reading this crap after seeing this.
What how's that possible
It not half bad
Fu#k it,imma read this It'll probably make me sick,but i will still be reading and sick
NVM,i'm out
Is there no romance in this ?? If not it'd be kinda boring I think!??
There is a short romance later, but not very important.
MC is simping for the know-it-all sl*t. I've dropped it there.
Thanks for the warning. Can you recommend a novel with a MC that is not naive or a simp/cuck?
Hp is so overused bruh
Last time I've heard, it's the most "fan-fictioned" fiction ever.
it is. But there are a few diamonds in the rough.
Halosty
Anton is a great-grandfather. He is living quite a happy life, despite his advanced age and... Read more
Anton is a great-grandfather. He is living quite a happy life, despite his advanced age and declining health… until a group of cultivator bandits moves into the area. The nearby guardians of the area, the Order of Ninety-Nine Stars, are unable to track them down as they continue to ravage nearby towns. During one desperate winter Anton is out on a hunt when his family- his entire village- is killed or taken as slaves by the bandits. He lacks the strength to fight them, and he wasn’t even present for their arrival to die with his loved ones. At the pit of his despair, he wonders if he ever had any chance to change things. What could he even do? He cannot even pull his best bow, and his eyesight is failing. If he had been a cultivator… perhaps there might have been a chance, but he was decades- perhaps even most of his life- too late.***Notes on cultivation levels:There are five general stages of cultivation, though the fifth is extremely rare. Each cultivation style might have their own name for the stages.1. Body Tempering2. Spirit Building/ occasionally System Creation (Ninety-Nine Stars)3. Constellation Formation (Ninety-Nine Stars)4. Life Transformation/Galaxy Construction (Ninety-Nine Stars)5. Ascension Collapse
Male Protagonist, Overpowered Protagonist, Weak to Strong, Sects, Body Tempering, Eastern Setting, Death of Loved Ones
I liked the story, it being different from the young masters and reincarnators, even from old school 'I found/inherited a wise old man in a ring'.A old dude, knowing most his family is lost and willing to die to get his grandkids back, and keep them safe.Though, it gets weird after people start ascending.
the use of past and present tense in the synopsis already keeps me away, feels like it'd be another Primordial Cultivator where everything is present tense even when it makes no sense. Anton is a great-grandfather. He is living quite a happy life, despite his advanced age and declining health… until a group of cultivator bandits moves into the area.I seriously can't fathom why you would use present tense when recounting something that has happened in the past...
Rank: C+
No joke, I read the name of the book and thought it was going to be about someone/something/some-group/some-system which cultivates elders… like it takes people and turns them into elders… slightly disappointed that it’s not
Who wants to read about an antique struggling to cultivate?
So you’d rather read about a kid struggling to cultivate or an antique reincarnated into a kid’s body?
You've got a point. That's why I stopped reading about all the dao brothers entirely. Especially the young horny waste of spaces.
Meh... It's ok I guess.The writing is good, but I can't feel close to the protagonist. I read like 140+ chaps and i got bored later.The cultivation system is different and interesting.Maybe he might get some change in his character and idk when/how.Mc wants to stop slavery and bring in a change to his world. He was already 100 before cultivating and he gained few years after breaking through few levels but decided to burn it by using some forbidden technique ? but still fast enough than others in cultivation.If someone read more chaps than me they could fill you in better of how's the novel.
Who would actually want to read something like this?
Username checks out.
Its average. Not great not terrible. The MC being old is not really that important as he acts like someone much younger that he should be. Try it if you have the time othewise don't go out of your way to read it.
This is the only reason you need to not read it.You did not get wise elderly mc.Its still a young man behaviour, the author gimmicks doesnt work
achei a bem legal e diferente... meio que me senti triste em algumas partes....
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UnstoppableJuggernaut
After his parents died, Alex Roth had a plan: become a wizard. Through hard work, he was accepted... Read more
After his parents died, Alex Roth had a plan: become a wizard. Through hard work, he was accepted into the world’s greatest university of wizardry—but fate had another plan.On his eighteenth, he is marked as one of his kingdom’s five Heroes, chosen to fight the land’s great enemy. But his brand is 'The Fool', worst of the marks.Rather than die or serve the other Heroes like Fools in the past, he packs up his little sister, his childhood friend and her cerberus, then flees for the university in hope of refuge, magic and to unravel the truth about his land’s evil.There’s one small problem: The Mark tries to ruin magic while enhancing skills outside of divinity, combat and spellcraft.……that is, unless he can learn to exploit the hell out of it.*****This the first time I am writing a web novel type story, and I hope you like it. I like progression stories and I've always wanted to try and write one like a few of the web novels that inspired me.Updates Tues-Wed-Thur-Fri-Sat.There are currently 20 advanced chapters on my patreon as a thank you to patrons.Join us on discord! https://discord.gg/A4M3CzfWBnChapters will be roughly 2000-2500 words.[participant in the Royal Road Writathon challenge]***Rating: This story is kind of like a PG-13 movie. There'll be gore and some swearing but not much beyond that. If that changes, I'll warn you. Tone: Tone will be a mix of some action-adventure with excitement, comedy, slice of life elements and mystery. I won't be going too dark with this story. There will be mentions of war, some death, grief and violence.MC: MC is analytical/rational with emotions. He is mostly in control of those emotions. MC will progress in power, eventually becoming very strong. When that happens, I'll add the Strong Lead tag.Fights: Fights will be detailed.***Stuff this story won't have:- Extreme grimdark content- Murderhobo plots- Edgy, anti-hero MC - Pacifist MC- Harems Collapse
Male Protagonist, Weak to Strong, Academy, Strategist, Age Progression, Magic, Game Elements, LitRPG
It's not bad, but it's not good either, it's average at best. It's a 5/10
praise mr fool!!
Guess he's expanding on the Sefirah domain, praise Mr. Fool indeed
hes expanding his influence to other novels
Rank: C-
Novel is so so, nothing to brag about. I had to ignore some of MC's decision making and constant plot armor to even continue reading. His university life is pretty boring, so if you skipped a couple chapters here and there you wouldn't really be missing anything. There's a few things I have a beef with. MC should never have brought his 10yr old sister with him. Leaving her with the Lu family is the most reasonable and safer route. MC has been in a lot of life and death situations but when he gets interrogated by authorities his cool and calm attitude is gone, and reverts back to your average wimpy 19yr old. The only good trait about MC is he puts in the work.
As of chapter 330The characters are well done, story is great but a slow burn for major stuff which isn't bad, romance is believable and the mc is realistic.The MCs blessing has upsides but its downsides are near crippling and he has to find ways around it to be able to fight at all.SpoilerMC seems to have an advantage with summoning magic for reasons not yet divulged, only thing I found grating but hopefully they have decent reasoning behind it.
can we get a solid review here up to 300+ chaps?
It's pretty decent, a cut above average western novels and is definitely a cut above the average cn web novel (to anyone with an opinion, before you express it, remember that there is simply MORE cn web novels both in title and in length and I hope you understand how average works)
Noice
this is some grade A shit
does that mean good or bad ?
Good oof lol
Is it me or the tag 'game elements' is wrongly included in the novel tags? I haven't seen status screen or something similar to it in the novel.
Encontrou algo que faça parte da TAG litrpg?
Im in ch 19 as of now i like this one. Im tires of the ones where the mc does everything effortlessly like a mary sue. The mc here does fail a bit, is scared when facing monsters . The world building is nice. this is a 4/5 for mebe reading on ahead. lets see how it goes.
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Polygamy is abolished. …We don’t have to force ourselves to live together anymore.... Read more
Polygamy is abolished.…We don’t have to force ourselves to live together anymore. Collapse
Arranged Marriage, Beastkin, Childhood Friends, Childhood Love, Childhood Promise, Demon Lord, Elves, Heroes, Magic, Magic Beasts, Male Protagonist, Marriage of Convenience, Mercenaries, Misunderstandings, Monster Girls, Monsters, Nobles, Obsessive Love, Saints, Weak to Strong, Yandere, Younger Love Interests
I read the MTL and completedBEST and SATISFYING ending that could have been possible for it.IT WAS AWESOME!!!! yes I am yelling from my rooftop9.4/10 - 0.6 is cut off due to all the heartbreaking and emotional arcs
Why korean romance novel is always about a broken Man, anyone have a novel name romance with sigma alpha MC who don't simp after a betrayal or break
Idk, it might be because according to the situation shown in P-hwa, there are so many Korean males that get NTR'd, So they created a novel of this type to fulfill their desire.. I guess.
Bruhhh
8/10 - Very nice, slightly wholesome K-drama-esque novel. Slow burn, well written, thought out characters. I'm sure there will be some anger at the FMCs actions at various times, but due to the character building, their actions become more understandable and palatable for people in their positions. I would recommend this as a good slow-burn romance novel. I have read the MTL to chapter 120 and so this review is of the state of the novel at that point and not presently at 37 chapters translated and edited.
#panic# wrong chapter upload?
Short synopsis is better. Either u read it or not
SpoilerThis novel has netorare, betrayal, rape, affair, and blackmail.
Wait, mc got ntr ????
how far did you read? in 24ch that is here only betrayal happened and that too a basic cliche. hope they wont get back together, bitch is nasty
Sien seems to have been forced to say those things to him. After all, she's not allowed marriage or anythign as the saintess of the purity goddess. Likely the bishop and knights were going to kill Berg unless they parted.There's no NTR or anything else he said. I don't know what that guy's talking about. Trolling I expect.
No, she had been threatened by the goddess directly that he will die, so she had to accept.She is still suffering (chap 64)
NO. there isn't NTR, betrayal or rape, stop lying without having read it, I'm already on chapter 100 and there was no real betrayal.
Please don't spread false information ?
Huh.
alright alright, ill dip a tongueEdit: its surprisingly good for korean drama. will continue reading if its updated regularly. MC is broken man whos childhood sweetheart demanded his heart, chewed it up and spat it out. his first wife is broken woman despised by own family and uses her as a tool. not much to judge in first 22 chapters but i assume it will be about broken people navigating their life in fantasy world. if anything to gripe about is that MC tad on a Simp spectrum with his sudden desire to take care of someone you just met. either he will get back with childhood bitch or not be a dealbreaker for me here. never ever, ever get back with someone who broke you. over all its worth a try reading what little there, doubt many will consider their time wasted
Tq for the details. I'm not gonna waste my time on mc who let the heroines push him around
i wouldnt call it pushing around. more of taking advantage of him being "nice guy" he puts their feeling first and their are putting own feelings first. Spoilerhe is trying to be best husband and she is trying to avoid him to preserve herself for destined one. obviously its MC but due miscommunication she has wrong preconceptionwhole thing is true towards korean drama though and conflicts come from characters refusing to communicate with each other. at same time characters are well defined and well writtenSpoilerhe is marrying to forget childhood sweetheart who broke him as one of reasons but like i said, if he takes sweetheart back... this goes into trash bin for me
he puts their feeling first and their are putting own feelings first.That does sound like a pushover. Unless he's always said what's in his mind (being straightforward)
It's like he can't get over his ex but still want to move on while also respecting his wives' choices. A meshwork of emotion
… Are the short description novels on the ride again???
Poison testers I summon YOU, tell me if it's good or not.GO
It’s not bad but I don’t like some things about the mc like how he acts tbh still pretty good SpoilerI just don’t like how he just lets his wife treat him the way she does like he is a monster that she needs to be wary off, and how the wife is actually just a traitor trying to get information to destroy his mercenary group but still somehow believes the mc is a cruel, ruthless even though he has been nothing but kind to her, I get that the information she acquired from rumours does give that impression but I mean what’s even the use of marrying someone if you are intending to betray them in the end, still I do like the fact that the mc wasn’t forceful on her still he shouldn’t have married after seeing the way she acted when she met her first if he really wanted his first marriage to last a lifetime but whatever
Seems Interesting I reached Chapter 10 that means it's just a few chapters ahead
Si estas harto de mucho sex y quieres estar medio sentimental entonces esta es tu tasa de Té lmao
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“Your Grace, there’s something I’d really like for my birthday.” “What is it?”... Read more
“Your Grace, there’s something I’d really like for my birthday.”“What is it?”“Will you promise to listen?”Then the man blatantly laughed.But who would point out his arrogance – a young Northern Duke who’s not even afraid of the Emperor? He could even get a throne if he wished for it.But it was just a sweet lover’s birthday wish.“Alright. I swear.”So, Juliet spoke lightly,“Please break up with me. I don’t love you anymore.”A fiancé just for show. A succession of meaningless nights.Now is the time to end seven years of unrequited love. Collapse
Aristocracy, Arrogant Characters, Artifacts, Beautiful Female Lead, Calm Protagonist, Cautious Protagonist, Clever Protagonist, Cold Love Interests, Contracts, Cousins, Cruel Characters, Curses, Demons, Dolls or Puppets, Dragons, Empires, European Ambience, Family, Fantasy World, Female Protagonist, Flashbacks, Found Family, Handsome Male Lead, Kidnappings, Magic, Mature Protagonist, Mercenaries, Mind Control, Misunderstandings, Monsters, Mysterious Illness, Near-Death Experience, Nobles, Older Love Interests, Persistent Love Interests, Personality Changes, Politics, Popular Love Interests, Possessive Characters, Priests, Protagonist Falls in Love First, Reincarnation, Religions, Royalty, Saints, Second Chance, Secrets, S*x Friends, Slow Romance, Sword Wielder, Tragic Past, Underestimated Protagonist, Unrequited Love, Wealthy Characters, Werebeasts, Wizards
Got around 20 chapters in, so not very far, but also more than just a surface impression:The story has many time jumps going back to a past, an alternative timeline etc and I had a very hard time keeping track of things. It doesn't start off that way, but once you get properly introduced to the characters it just keeps happening and at this point I just have no clue, what timeline I am in. Where I am at etc.Maybe it's just the translation not being able to translate proper time cues over, but not a fan.I won't comment on the content of the story, seeing as I just barely got started. Just wanted to share my pain and warn people about this convoluted timething.
Quick summarySpoilerfml want to breakup after having relationship for a few years.this also happened because mc is someone who put no value in love, he change partner a lot because he doesn't want to be restraint by love. Although he didn't abuse fmc, they were only in "friend of benefit" status. After she said about the breakup, mc start thinking about his past attitude toward her.As usual, there will be drama where the mc misunderstood fmc but they won't talk it out. It will drag on and tired readers feeling
Thank you brave warrior
Is this gonna be one of those stories where the guy treats her badly for years but suddenly becomes nice when she wants to leave? Cause those stories disgust me especially since the author uses plot armor to make their relationship work out of nowhere
Hmm ? this need to be read by someone and give a review cause it seem good and bad at same timeGeeeeJoin the ranobe discord, link in my profile
It's like you read my mind. I think the same
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He became the villain in the possessed game, the rival of the main character, and the second seat.... Read more
He became the villain in the possessed game, the rival of the main character, and the second seat. Collapse
Academy, Aristocracy, Beautiful Female Lead, Complex Family Relationships, Dense Protagonist, Hard-Working Protagonist, Kind Love Interests, Knights, Magic, Male Protagonist, Misunderstandings, Nobles, Older Love Interests, Royalty, Senpai-Kouhai Relationship, Sibling Rivalry, Student Council, Transmigration, Transported into a Game World, Wizards, Younger Love Interests
It is just an another average novel that you have dropped at some point. A dense protagonist surrounded by women, he has to save the world but,... Fill the blanks and write your novel. His 'but' is that he has to be the second runner in everything to push the real hero forward. That reason became stale and repetitive, and after some time his reason to be the second seat should have disappeared but it did not. Author tried to make MC irritable then immediately drop it. Him being second ranker, him being around student council hottie, him being around princess, him having a genius student at his beck and call does not arouse interest in others somehow.There are not many unique things to the story. An academy, empty power ups, some oohs and aahs and that's all really.
it isn't very clear. I think author is confused about which direction he wants to build this story.Spoilerat one point he acts arrogant in front of his class because he wants to follow the plot but the next moment he wants to "conqueror" the heroine which is going against the plot simultaneously.
Dense Protagonis Naah i am good. Hate that ?? shit to guts.
Same
I read it once. It was fine, but the finale ended with a harem. Which was disappointing.
Might has well have no synopsisThe man's got an image to maintain, but isn't quite equipped with all the skills he needs to maintain that image. That is, he has the body's magical ability, but that's all he has. Experience? Zero. Theoretical knowledge? Zero.And he needs be the number 2 student in the academy, but cannot be number 1.You can probably tell from that already, that this is a story of our MC needing to maintain an "arrogant" character in public, while secretly struggling to obtain the skills and results to back that attitude. All while misunderstandings of him build xDThat felt like it was worded a bit generically, but oh well. Personally, I'm expecting that eventually he'll need to be careful about accidentally overtaking the first place student, which could have potential for more misunderstandings, but at any rate, I expect people who like misunderstanding type stories to enjoy thisSome homie from novel updates' review
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Isn’t it an unwritten rule in the industry that new gacha characters with good performance should... Read more
Isn’t it an unwritten rule in the industry that new gacha characters with good performance should not be male characters? The tutorial doesn’t start until 10 years later. Collapse
Beautiful Female Lead, Fantasy World, Game Elements, Male Protagonist, Protagonist Strong from the Start, Reincarnated in a Game World, Special Abilities, Strong to Stronger, Virtual Reality, Gamers, Protagonist NPC
Well the concept for this novel is unique then many other VR novel as other mostly multiplayer VR but this is like single player VR like gensin impact. Now if like gensin impact if other players can join other players on there world it would be nice
#panic# chapters 41 to 43 missing
actually nice, albeit a tad plain so far
I was going to do an evaluation but the guy below has already done it.Rank C.Obs: Don't forget to downvote me ??(? ??? ??? ??? ?)??
out of curiosity, what IS your rating system? xD like, give me an example of a novel for each sorta letter. If you want to! Just kinda curious what a C means here.
Ranks C they are works that are between rubbish and average, the + No C means that it has some potential, the - No C means that I do not see much potential in the work
I thought your review was so horrendously bad that 62 people had to down vote it, but then I clicked read more.
lol that's the bad thing about having a bad reputation haha
You literally asked to be downvoted
a soul for another soul
This is the first time i see so many dislike, lol You don't follow trends you create them
Exam season, so here's a quick five-chapter review.The tag isn't there because the scenes aren't anywhere but the author's patreon, but this is very much an 18+ novel, so let that realign your expectations before diving in.The premise is alright so far, and the MC's okay; bland in my opinion, and he doesn't really seem the type I'd enjoy reading about, but he has a distinct personality and that works, even if I feel he's a bit dull.The writing is- choppy. There's lots of exposition and the prose doesn't flow so much like gentle water as it does like pebbles tumbling down a cliffside. It's not bad per-say, but I can imagine it getting grating the more you read. There's lots of telling with very little to break it up, and the narration itself isn't entertaining enough to make up for that. Still, it's a lot better than I was expecting, with readable sentences and decent descriptions.The dialogue is just fine; the usual sorta messy banter that probably reads better in the original language. The characters themselves are distinct so far, which makes up for that, but whether or not they remain one-note stereotypes or are improved beyond that; it's honestly kinda impossible to tell.We've seen the premise before and the world is your standard VR thing, so this is a story that'll probably depend on the actual plot development and how that simple idea is developed. I'd say the characters would carry this, but I can't imagine any of the characters introduced thus far being able to do that.Overall, a lot better than I was expecting it to be, but sort of hampered by the writing style and the boring main character. Give it a shot, a solid high-6ish out of ten, might reach a 7 if it improves.My synopsis;NPC-VR novel with the MC's main goal being escape. Strength development probably won't play a big part for the MC himself and there is some sort of system that hasn't done much except give him quests and rewards. Seemingly might give him access to more and more 'player' abilities. No consequences to turning the system down so far. Smart-ish, powerful MC, plus a tower to climb except they aren't stuck inside it.Give it a shot if that sounds like your thing!
'quick' TLDR near the end ya'll.
TLDR??
= Too Long, Didn't Reader.
Too long don't read
Quickest review ever lol
Anyone up for the sacrifice to read thisRanobe Discord link on profileCome and join us there. Novel discussion and more
A brave soul that’s known as Micky already up there. We should await his return
Ohk i will be ready when you get his update... May this soul rest in pieces
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He is alive and kicking
If you want something to readhttps://ranobes.top/user/CodeSpectre/favorites/238012/
All I would say is that this story is good, with our companion who could be called the Goddess of Fortune, our MC may not lack any well-endowed female companions.
Any pioneers?
I shall sacrifice myself.Wait for my report.
Any good?
I Am back... and it's average.The MC and the story in the first 20 chapters are unremarkable, nothing is thrilling about it.The MC lived for 10 years in his new world and treated it as a real world but he encountered a player and suddenly it's a game world for him... It's a bit hard to so swallow his nonchalant attitude about this.There is also some Shu Shu according to the translator every 20 chapters or so.And that is it, maybe it will become more enjoyable in the future but for now, it's just okay.
hey what?
pioneers, people who tried reading it and got something to say about it.
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A modern Japanese man reincarnated into a game as Welner von Zeavert. Though he reincarnated as a... Read more
A modern Japanese man reincarnated into a game as Welner von Zeavert. Though he reincarnated as a noble’s son, he is neither the main character nor the hero of this world. He become someone who didn’t even appear in the game.Plus, with only [Spearmanship] as his skill, he can’t even join the hero party to clear main story.His small advantages are the fact that he became the hero’s friend and his father’s rather high status. He’s nothing but a supporting character of the story.He noted the game story that he knew from his past life, used it, along with his authority and influence as a noble, to survive from demon king army.But, without realizing it, the knowledge from his past life and his memories of the game story affected the world. He saved people that should have died and took care of events that didn’t appear in the game.With that, he carved history of this worldThis is not a story about the hero. This is a story about struggle and effort of a young noble. Collapse
Adapted to Manga, Aristocracy, Demon Lord, Demons, Domestic Affairs, European Ambience, Hard-Working Protagonist, Magic, Male Protagonist, Misunderstandings, Mob Protagonist, Nobles, R-15, Reincarnated in a Game World, Reincarnation, Romantic Subplot, Spear Wielder, Strategic Battles, Strategist, Wars
Generic Japanese style writing noble character in medieval time, always suck ?
Dropped it at 20 chapters. I have read a lot in this genre, but the writing feels like someone's first attempt at a novel. Also don't like the relationship dynamics with the other cast.
Domestic Affairs New tag?Hmmm... No. It's just less used.
Even though a lot of things have happened but I still feel only a few things have happened...donno why but I love this novel
I complain about everything but can't complain about this. It's really good.
10/10 one of the best fantasy novels I've read so far. Don't know about y'all but I am only concerned if the novel is interesting. Plots may be predictable, world and character design might be cliche, but as long as it's interesting, I will read it(well the exception is excessive stupidity sometimes, that would make me drop)
i agree brother
I like your choices .
Can you please recommend anything that is similar to this title?
Maybe ( acadamy's deceased ate it all
Naa.. it's a harem one and it is more inclined towards APOV and TNE
Full name?
APOV= Author's POVTNE= The Novel's Extra
Apart from the unnecessary info dump it's great novel
The novel is good, but the characters have a great lack of dignity compared to their stature. In addition, like most Japanese novels, the characters are few changes, most of them are superficial and one-sided. Why do Japanese novels seem so less serious, as if they teach morals to children (exaggerated respect and sorry for every little mistake, with so much illogical bending by kings and nobles) strange
They have to, after all nobody wants another atomic bomb.
What you are experiencing is called cultural differences. If you don't want to be insulted by Asians on how bad-mannered and thankless you are to your elders then don't insult our culture.
Cultural differences? Lol if their ancestors were aware of this Cultural difference they would be ashamed, just admit it everything went downhill after the bombs, and all of them were seemingly indoctrinated into being submissive AF.
I have a lot to say since you seem to lack knowledge of Asian culture and it's history so I don't want to argue with you. Have a good day! May you have a happy life.
At least theyre better than you and your country right?
Whoa that's deep, just hold on a minute I think your deeply enlightening comment has given me the courage to finally go into that deep dark forest and just kill myself.
thank goodness
Looks like you didn't get it? The forests name is Aokigahara.
Anywhere is fine as long as you get it done.
everything went downhill after the bombstrue, just look at their birth rates and suicide rates. Masculinity is dead there. I find it funny, how many weebs imagine it to be an utopian country.
It's a utopia country if you are masculine... Lool
Manga name please?
Donde encuentro el manga
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The 13th disciple of the Great Mount Hua Sect. One of the Greatest Third-Generation Swordsmen. The... Read more
The 13th disciple of the Great Mount Hua Sect. One of the Greatest Third-Generation Swordsmen. The Plum Blossom Sword Master, Chungmyung.After slicing the head of the peerless Heavenly Demon, who threw the world into chaos, he slept an eternal sleep on the peak of the Hundred Thousand Great Mountains. Jumping over a hundred years, he comes back in the body of a child.But… what? Mount Hua declined? What the hell are you talking about!?It’s only natural to want to live if you’re going broke.“Decline? Even though I’m here? Who would dare!”Plum blossoms eventually fall.But when the cold winter passes and spring comes, plum blossoms shall bloom again.“But I’m gonna die first before Mount Hua gets revived! If you’re gonna go bust, might as well do it right, you bastards!”The beginning of the Plum Blossom Sword Master, Chungmyung’s solitary struggle to save the thoroughly declining Mount Hua Sect. Collapse
Adapted to Manhwa, Hiding True Identity, Hot-blooded Protagonist, Male Protagonist, Proactive Protagonist, Quirky Characters, Reincarnation, Sect Development, Sword Wielder
10/10 must read, don't believe all the low rated reviews, they have no taste.
For manwha readers start at if you don't feel like rereading [Chapter 118: Plum blossoms will cover the sky someday (3)]
Just read 3 chapters and I don't understand how can MC be so dumb this early.He says all the elites and other disciples of the sect died and the remaining ones are only children who knows nothing about the sect. And fast forward a hundred years later...he is surprised why the sect has declined. It doesn't take a lot to find the reason why it declined u dumb f#ck.
I think its because he thought they would at least have their knowledge of the techniques. If they had the techniques the sect wouldnt have dropped which is evidence of the later chapters when they do get those techniques back
Where is the comic compared to this?
There may be a lot of action and adventure, but the true genre of this novel is comedy. Never in my life i laughed so much !!! This novel is really peerless, you won't be disappointed Chung Myung is a TRUE daoist ! AHAHAHHA!
Question good sir or madam! I've been waiting for the next season of the comic for some time but can you tell me if there's any romance? Cause I'm quite fond of senior sister in the comic
So far no signs of romance … this novels strongest point is emotion honestly you can cut out the action and it still be amazing
If I'm not wrong someone (who read mtl) from the wiki said that there isn't any romance. The author has done such a good job u won't feel anything missing in the novel, everything is smooth asf, fun, action, plot ...But maybe the person was wrong and we will see some romance.Still unlikely because they may drink and eat meat, yet they are still somehow taoists. Or Chung Myung will leave Mount Hua to build a family after he dealt with demonic sect ?
The chances are very low. Regardless of what he does, Chung myung is often portrayed as a true Taoist at heart..there are very low chances that he will allow someone to enter his heart.
So far nope
one of the best novels in this site
Similar book recommendations please
Once Upon A Time, There Was A Spirit Sword Mountain. It reminded me of it.
Novel is gold but its webtoon is a gem do read it but first read novel, webtoon skips a lot of info. But i recommend reading both webtoon and novel, novel's language is a little hard like all Korean novels but the webtoon is just awesome in art and all.....
If you had to pick only one, would you recommend the novel or the webtoon?
Read webtoon its awesome but currently on hiatus
"… what is this?Oh? Is that the sound of hope crashing into pieces?"Godamn! To clean! I'll admit fellow daoists, I HATED the first 20 chapters of this story. My advice to you? Start from 20+ it's pretty f#cking nuts. The 1st 20 chapters is awk dialogue, and establishing that the MC is a reincarnator, and his sect has gone to shit. This is pretty much a sect rebuilding story whle the MC helps train up the younger generation to become OP again. It's honestly grown on me a lot. Pretty fking epic!
a major turn off in chapter 1 and 2.i cant believe the author forgot mc's battle experience that when reincarnated he forgot them all and got beat up by a beggar. smh.
I don't know if this is a troll or not but it explicitly states why, even with his experience, he gets beat up in the beginning lmao
strange is, reincarnating and being able to do it even with this new body, before you train your body and get used to it (besides you have cultivation)
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If the big breasted demon queen was reduced to a s*ave, what would you do to her? Would... Read more
If the big breasted demon queen was reduced to a s*ave, what would you do to her? Would you kill her and become humanity’s greatest hero? Or would you ens*ave her and enjoy the highest level of pleasure in the world? No, he doesn’t want any of that, Lin Xiao just wanted to be an unremarkable reserve hero. Black stocking long leg princess, two-faced loli saint… no one can tempt him to change his majestic ideals of eating and waiting for death! That’s why his answer was — “Demon Queen, can you quickly put on your clothes and scram on out of here?” Collapse
Adapted to Manhua, Battle Academy, Battle Competition, Cunning Protagonist, Demon Lord, Demons, European Ambience, Heroes, Hiding True Abilities, Lazy Protagonist, Loli, Maids, Male Protagonist, Multiple POV, Overpowered Protagonist, Protagonist Falls in Love First, Religions, Saints, Shameless Protagonist, S*aves, Sleeping, Strong to Stronger, Sword And Magic, Transmigration, Tsundere, Yandere
MC is not a good person in this one. He repeatedly s*xually molests and humiliates the poor demon girl.
alpha or beta?
MC tertolol yang pernah saya baca
If the big breasted demon queen was reduced to a s*ave, what would you do to her?Would you kill her and become humanity’s greatest hero? Or would you ens*ave her and enjoy the highest level of pleasure in the world?No, he doesn’t want any of that, Lin Xiao just wanted to be an unremarkable reserve hero. Black stocking long leg princess, two-faced loli saint… no one can tempt him to change his majestic ideals of eating and waiting for death!That’s why his answer was — “Demon Queen, can you quickly put on your clothes and scram on out of here?” Please stop why do they always have to be so unremakable this trope is on of the worst in 95% its just plain bad and boring the rest are 4% smut and 1% ok-ish story but the 1 % is already to high a number. Why cant authors do something unqiue like "he was evil so he did **** with and than **** ******* also he did ********" or " killed her in public because otherwise he wouldve been goten reked" or something like that ( sure it doesnt have to be something bad/evil but its obvoius in which direction this thing wants to atleast from this text.).
An chinese old school type novel
Is the demon queen in the harem?
Fu#king beta
So the mc isn't a man of culture?
Wasn't there a manhua about this?
there is ??
I feel like this is going to be the same for +1400 chapters
Hermod
Han Seo-jin is a top ranker of Pick Me Up with an account name of Loki. Due to a bug he... Read more
Han Seo-jin is a top ranker of Pick Me Up with an account name of Loki.Due to a bug he encounter while clearing one of the top floors inside the game, he was summoned inside the game as a hero… a Level 1… 1-Star Hero…Loki, the once called, master of masters, is now a [Level 1] - [1-Star Hero] that must follow the orders of his master.However… Collapse
Adapted to Manhwa, Character Growth, Clever Protagonist, Depictions of Cruelty, Determined Protagonist, Dungeons, Elemental Magic, Game Elements, Game Ranking System, Gamers, God-human Relationship, Goddesses, Gods, Interdimensional Travel, Level System, Loyal Subordinates, Magic, Male Protagonist, Multiple Transported Individuals, Transported into a Game World, Virtual Reality, Weak Protagonist, Weak to Strong
Ch75 in manhwa = ch 85 in novel
I'm looking for a novelHis system transmigrated him to another world then killed him then after some time he became god of disease and decay I can't seem to remember the name of the Novel
Soul of Negary?
It's really good, do give it a try if you got nothing to read
so it had a novel huh
it may sound bad but trust me its good
I read the mtl...Spoiler At the end He returned to the real world and the plot of his summoning by the goddess is to make him into a living battery so that the world can continue to exist. However, he says f#ck that and just fought all the bugs(?) continuously instead, so the game worlds can continue to exist. Well at least this is how I think I remember it be. I just used the browser's auto translate feature when reading it somewhere...
Actually, not as bad as I expected with that summery. Tho I expected something really bad.In conclusion: ok to read, if you want to compete against other Korean titans, need more chapters. Really need to see if it can live up to expectations
Recommend some korean titans buddy
Just use filter and sort by rating. FFF class trashero, solo leveling, the player who returned in 10000 years etc.
Any more? Cause they are already in the bag.
I'm not a regressor.Invisible Dragon.Just use filter and sort by rating
invicible dragon is peak
My review is based on the webtoon/manga so it may be different for the novel.Honestly it's refreshing to see smthg new such as this, player summoned as a character in a game played by an normal human on earth trope.The beginning of the story is slow but later it'll get better even if it's still not that fast, plotwise it's interesting while MC is given a clear goal to survive but also find out why he was sent here (NB: He was one of the strongest player of the game before being summoned) in this game where if your character die, they rly die so he need to somehow find a way to let his "owner" play smart and not recklessly.The major party of the story will be about his party going through each stage clearing it with ease at first and later struggling with the fight being longer and following a lore explained by the MC while he's also discovering new thing bout it via a summoned character perspective.For the side character only those in MC party will be developed but the other "gacha" summoned character who are mostly 1/2 stars are most of the time off screen or there just to get headache to MC.The story is very similar to a gacha game with a tower to clear each stage and building to get effect and ofc p2w pack lol.Anyways it's a pretty good webtoon/manga idk novel but it may be better. So def recommend it if you're interested.
Read the manhwa its quite above average i guess, its just the pacing of the manhwa is slower than normal, will probably be completed in 5 years lol.
Pick me up before you go
Weaver of Fables
Unable to satisfy its directive to obtain perfection, the most powerful machine lifeform in the... Read more
Unable to satisfy its directive to obtain perfection, the most powerful machine lifeform in the galaxy finds itself at the end of its life cycle. When the sun consumes it, that should have been the end.In another world, an unusual sword appears in the Seven Killing Swords sect and the battle over it causes such a calamity that it sets two entities on an inevitable, destined collision course. One of them is Lan Xiaohui, a disciple of the sect is betrayed by the man she is engaged to and left for dead in the sect's ancient and deadly hunting grounds with a broken cultivation. The other is the sword that is the source of great calamities due to its aura that compels all intelligent creatures to own it — an awakened treasure that possesses memories of its past incarnation as an autonomous weapon platform.With another chance at life — one of them now a cursed, demonic sword, and the other an exiled cultivator seeking revenge — will they be able to reach the pinnacle this time and become immortal?What to expect:- Mature, semi-realistic storytelling with no repeating arcs.- Fast cultivation with increasing LitRPG elements as the story progresses.- An MC that is more tactical and strategic than outright just powerful.What not to expect:- MC that becomes human.- AI that acts and talks like a GPS.- Rampant smut or romance. Collapse
Antihero Protagonist, Body Tempering, Cold Protagonist, Dao Comprehension, Demonic Cultivation Technique, Fast Cultivation, Level System, Magic Beasts, Master-Disciple Relationship, Overpowered Protagonist, Reincarnated as a Monster, Reincarnated as an Object, Reincarnated in a Game World, Reincarnated in Another World, Sect Development, Sexual Cultivation Technique, Unique Cultivation Technique, Weak to Strong, Xianxia, LitRPG
It had so much potential until she tries to join a sect, the it just becomes a f#cking boring chore to read, not enjoyable anymore.
140 chapter and the fcking MC's holder still couldnt put her revenge and get trashed when meeting ?
Um, what on earth is the "Sexual Cultivation Technique" tag doing on this kind of novel? Pls, don't tell me her and the sword are doing this
Kinda. But not really. They are just hugging
Sigh.. just like how our generations are downgrading these novels are competing to be even worse
Wtf!?! Why is it that whenever I see a new novel from Royalroad here it's mostly about non human mc
Fu#king furries
Metal in this case
All the dislikes u got prove how many weird mind f#cked people are wandering this app lol
What? I don't get it!
The furries, whats there not to get?
So. you got butt hurt over a stupid joke, quite impressive.
I'm not butt hut lol simply pointing out the obvious
good stuff.this was unexpectedly not bad at all .
Quote: 14042001A novel with potential, but I don't like the hero's behavior. He wants to be desired, but he gives his lady all his knowledge and treasures, as if to say: Take everything and get rid of me.I endorse a maxim: If you want to be desired, give them fish, but don't teach them to fish. Gi[b][/b]ve them a little and take a little.Well, this is just my opinion, try it, you might like itQuote: 14042001A novel with potential, but I don't like the hero's behavior. He wants to be desired, but he gives his lady all his knowledge and treasures, as if to say: Take everything and get rid of me.I endorse a maxim: If you want to be desired, give them fish, but don't teach them to fish. Give them a little and take a little.Well, this is just my opinion, try it, you might like it
Please stop. Its like they're competing who can come up with a more ridiculous title
Seems this batch of novels is one of the weakest we've seen recently. Has anyone found any of them to be particularly good or interesting?
The rock one is awesome
Daoist companion in pandanovel there is a jewel with the name of cursed immortality (Browser translator)
Nada, just disappointment. :c
Me reading the "Do not expect" part of the description: "- Rampant smut or romance." On a sword??Ummm...what? Is this a thing? **Loses hope in humanity...**
hey swords and sheaths go well together ok?dont bring humanity into this
The quest for the ultimate harem collect-a-thon, one sheath at a time.
VeganMaster
Joseph Knox, one of the most prolific and well-known serial killers on the planet. A... Read more
Joseph Knox, one of the most prolific and well-known serial killers on the planet.A person considered so demented and manic that even trying to reason with him was believed to be a waste of time. A man so far gone that he seemingly didn't deserve any pity even on his deathbed.So why? Why would a man like him receive a second chance? And why did the world around him seem so familiar? Collapse
Assassins, Blind Protagonist, Bloodlines, Cold Protagonist, Master-Disciple Relationship, Previous Life Talent, Ruthless Protagonist, Secret Organizations, Fanfiction, Naruto, Multiple POV
It got boring. The mc's background is that of a ruthless evil assassin that draws pleasure from cutting people up: the way the author wrote his backstory led us all to believe this was a story about a psychopath...which couldn't be further from the truth. The mc's backstory exists only for the sake of providing some early bonuses for the mc, like knowing how to fight, or knowing how to sneak around, or projecting his "killing intent" all over the place like some premature ej*culation. The longer the novel goes on, the more the author's self-insert comes to the surface, because this author has no idea how to write the character he started out with and decided to switch him out entirely. Some people might claim this is character development, but to me, the contrast is so jarring it's like some doppelganger just replaced the mc. The author tries to give many reasons for this change, that the mc was shown familial love for the first time and decided to just stop loving murder...as if that translates in any way, and later on he even claims that nature energy is the reason behind the mc's drastic change in personality...and i truly mean drastic: the mc goes from alleged psychopath to gary stu - he even starts regretting murdering his enemies, feeling that they might have families, he also starts caring deeply about child soldiers and his inner monologues become a crying sniveling fest of pointless drivel boohoo poor me and all this war around me...ugh. I would have been fine with the mc being a kind character from the get-go, it's just that this so called character progression is too damn abrupt...i decided to treat chapter 107 as the ending for this novel, which to me, is quite apt since it could be considered a decent enough ending to leave it on. The overall journey was alright, some cool moments here and there, so i would rate it 3 stars, an average read.
It would be surprising if a serial killer was a rational person. Also, why should we feel sorry for a serial killer, motherf#cker?
Ain't no way the cover is the birdbox girl ripped as hell ??
Its good but be warn mc is dark and ruthless, Not one of those cringy horny villain youngmaster type but actual assasin/mafia boss type who dont blink to touture and kill people. Some parts of the story is dark and gory, tread at your own risk.
Verily, the copious amount of cringe that doth ooze from this wretchedness is akin to a malignant cancer afflicting my very soul.Joseph Knox, one of the most prolific and well-known serial killers on the planet.A person considered so demented and manic that even trying to reason with him was believed to be a waste of time. A man so far gone that he seemingly didn't deserve any pity even on his deathbed.
Kiss me.
*smooch* there you go
oh my
doesn't look good
Why Naruto is blind swordsman Novel name and description is not matchingSharinganJoin the ranobe discord link in my profile
SunriseCV
Years ago, Earth was indoctrinated into the «System.» Earth was not the only place with... Read more
Years ago, Earth was indoctrinated into the «System.»Earth was not the only place with the System, however. With the System came the other races, Invaders. The Invaders had one goal, to obtain ownership of this new habitable planet. This created a bloodbath, and for years the war raged.This didn’t really have much to do with Derek. Derek was kind of a loner. Yeah, he enjoyed the occasional chat or drink with others, but he never stayed in one place too long or really got to know anybody new.Derek did happen to be rather strong. After the years of fighting monster and Invaders alone, he had become quite adept at surviving. One thing that helped keep him alive was his refusal to get involved with others. He rarely cooperated with teams.One day, Derek broke his rules and decided to lend some help, as the mission didn’t seem too hard. He should have stuck to being alone.***Hey everyone, this is my fiction, «System Change.» It’s the first time I’ve really tried to write a serial. All feedback is really appreciated.I plan to release chapters every Tuesday and Thursday. With occasional extra chapters being released.I will try to maintain a word count between 1500-2500 words per chapter.Thank you! Collapse
Game Elements, LitRPG, Magic, Post-apocalyptic, Male Protagonist, Weak to Strong, Loner Protagonist, Monsters, Dungeons, Level System, Evolution, Overpowered Protagonist
Perfect, stopped on 228.
I've read to the, at the time, latest chapter of 235. It's a good read if you don't have anything going on but not drop what you're doing when there's a new chapter.First off, don't expect the MC to be alone half the time even though the summary leads you to that expectation. All the reviews bashing the author/story about it is a bit much. Without spoiling it, there is a legitimate reason for Derek putting in quite a bit of effort for his companions. Anyone saying they wouldn't seek and treasure companionship after undergoing the same experience as MC is lying or a sociopath. I will reassure you that he does adventure off alone for a bit before he returns once had his introvert batteries filled. He does meet some interesting and decently fleshed out characters but it remains to be seen if they'll be developed beyond that.The author seems to have created a pretty big world for his MC. Even from the beginning, there are hints of a variety of exciting arcs that's building up in just book one. Unfortunately, there haven't been nay climatic battles or struggles for Derek. He's OP for all the conflicts he engages in. There has yet to be any situation where he's being suppressed by his opponent. Thus, no actual excitement to be had when reading his battles. Hopefully the author will change that soon as he'll have to move Derek to a stronger region or introduce comparatively strong antagonists because of his protagonist strength increase throughout book one. At the moment, it wouldn't be wrong to say a good percentage of the story can be perceived as slice of life.For the format of the story, it's overall pretty good. Great prose with little to no grammatical errors. Chapters length is nice and there aren't too much filler beyond the author’s constant display of ALL of Derek's status page. It's a bit annoying and you'll soon be skimming, if not skipping, past them since the author will mention any changes in his MC's thoughts.
First i feel interesting but 38 ch enough for this shit mcAmazing double system World travel Want to became "lone wolf" but "Playing hero" instead but dont want to full hero maybe 1/4 enough attitude Poor in the new world but give anything for free Simp mc but to nice lets call him "super simp"Low level but wasting time teaching a stupid stubborn kid Dropped I hate dao of dragging author
from a lone wolf, to a hero type carrying kids and a village with him and leveling them up etc... pretty disappointing
When he wasting time with thomas in dungeon That's it!Enough for me
Can someone tell me from which chapter MC will be overpowered? I don’t wanna waste my time reading him grinding leveling or whatever…
Uh chap 5 onwards
From what should have been a nice MC to a f#cking annoying and trash MC
From cool mc to pushover mc 2/5
The scribblehub reviews say ‘logical mc till about chapter 90 when it randomly turns into slice of life’ and ‘generic litrpg but a good one’
Tamba
The Adrasia empire on the Vogel continent. There is a battle over the throne of such an empire that... Read more
The Adrasia empire on the Vogel continent. There is a battle over the throne of such an empire that possesses powerful military and vast territory.With the successor undecided, the children of the emperor are vying to expand their power. However, there was one prince that everyone says will definitely not become the emperor.The seventh prince, Arnold Lakes Adler. The young man who was inferior to his younger twin brother in every way, the dull prince.Incompetent and lethargic, Arnold wastes everyday just playing around. However, behind the scenes, he is one of the only five SS-Class adventurers called ‘Silver’.Seeing the intensifying battle for the throne he decided «I don’t want to die so let’s have my little brother become the emperor…»This is the tale of absurd secret manoeuvres of the prince who is uninterested in the title of the emperor. Collapse
Adapted to Manga, Adventurers, Beautiful Female Lead, Carefree Protagonist, Clever Protagonist, Comedic Undertone, Cunning Protagonist, Demi-Humans, Demons, Depictions of Cruelty, Dragon Slayers, Dwarfs, Elves, Empires, Family Conflict, Famous Protagonist, Fantasy World, Guilds, Handsome Male Lead, Heroes, Hiding True Abilities, Hiding True Identity, Human Experimentation, Kingdoms, Magic, Magic Beasts, Male Protagonist, Misunderstandings, Monsters, Nobles, Overpowered Protagonist, Politics, Protagonist Strong from the Start, Royalty, Schemes And Conspiracies, Secret Identity, Secrets, Sibling Rivalry, Siblings, Slow Romance, Special Abilities, Spirit Advisor, Sword And Magic, Twins, Underestimated Protagonist, Younger Brothers
LET's GO! I HAVE WAITED FOR THIS SERIES TO BE TAKEN BACK UP FOR MORE THAN A YEAR NOW AND IT'S FINALLY BACK! LESGOOOO.
It seems that the translation for this series has been picked up again. Please can anyone confirm the same? The status on this info page has changed and it doesn't show the struck-out 'Translation' anymore.
I have been following up almost every week but this does not seem to be getting any updates. Does anyone have any idea why? Has this been dropped? There are some websites where there are more than 530 chapters but the translation is crap. WAITING if anyone picks it up here.
Please just tell me when will it continue i can not wait, have been waiting for update for months now
esperando el siguiente capitulo
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Harem = Good?
SpoilerPrince to king then emperorOh btw if you really like manipulative mc then good for you. And I'm reading this for plot yes for plot only
Heyo buddy, any news if this is going to be picked up again?
No, the translation group already said that they will not continue to translate the LN to WN anymore
Capt_mermain1
Bob is someone that hate people who praise Lord Buggy D. Clown as the strongest being on One Piece... Read more
Bob is someone that hate people who praise Lord Buggy D. Clown as the strongest being on One Piece alongside God Usopp. His hate suddenly bring him to his death and even worse, his soul got transferred into Lord Buggy's body. How will Bob live as our Lord and Saviour Buggy?***Disclaimer: I am not the writer of One Piece and it's characters. It is fully owned by Oda-sensei.English is not my first language, so pardon my bad grammar. I've tried to improve it after messy early chapters. It might still not good enough, but I hope it's better now.Fanfics are: "Transcended as Lord Buggy" & "Fairy Tail: Sun Eater" Collapse
Fanfiction, One Piece, Reincarnation, Male Protagonist, Special Abilities, Weak to Strong
Harem??
Its a great novel to read.The best part about it for me is he has a goal in his mind for his future, his family's future, and his crew's future. Hes righteous enough for me with enough cold bloodedness in him to make it worth the read. He could be a bit more calculating and coldblooded but hes buggy "the clown" so its alright.Read it for those who want a nice read and not just someone who steamrolls everyone with plot holes and powerups for no reason.
Harem??
La historia era relativamente buena, pero nos encontramos con momentos super vergonzosos dignos de konosuba. la verdad, la deje luego de la pelea contra kaido. Para mi ese fue el final.
its good
Discount low-priced Strawhats,with buggy as main
Its one of those novels in which if you ignore the grammer in starting chapters, will get really good.I have read it on webnovel and it's really a very unique and underrated novel. One problem other than weird grammer would be the large amount OC's but it really makes up for it in the story development department. Give it a try if you want
ANYONE WHO WANTS TO VOLUNTEER AND 'KIND' ENOUGH TO TRY AND GIVE US A REVIEW?
Reads like someone tried to put a broken pasta noodle back together using gum, weirdly choppy also I have read mtl that is easier to understand
Read it on wn it’s free
It's good, I liked every adventure they did
How is it????
already posted, but putting it here so you get notified as wellReads like someone tried to put a broken pasta noodle back together using gum, weirdly choppy also I have read mtl that is easier to understand
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