Years ago, Earth was indoctrinated into the «System.» Earth was not the only place with... Read more
Years ago, Earth was indoctrinated into the «System.»Earth was not the only place with the System, however. With the System came the other races, Invaders. The Invaders had one goal, to obtain ownership of this new habitable planet. This created a bloodbath, and for years the war raged.This didn’t really have much to do with Derek. Derek was kind of a loner. Yeah, he enjoyed the occasional chat or drink with others, but he never stayed in one place too long or really got to know anybody new.Derek did happen to be rather strong. After the years of fighting monster and Invaders alone, he had become quite adept at surviving. One thing that helped keep him alive was his refusal to get involved with others. He rarely cooperated with teams.One day, Derek broke his rules and decided to lend some help, as the mission didn’t seem too hard. He should have stuck to being alone.***Hey everyone, this is my fiction, «System Change.» It’s the first time I’ve really tried to write a serial. All feedback is really appreciated.I plan to release chapters every Tuesday and Thursday. With occasional extra chapters being released.I will try to maintain a word count between 1500-2500 words per chapter.Thank you! Collapse
Game Elements, LitRPG, Magic, Post-apocalyptic, Male Protagonist, Weak to Strong, Loner Protagonist, Monsters, Dungeons, Level System, Evolution, Overpowered Protagonist
Perfect, stopped on 228.
I've read to the, at the time, latest chapter of 235. It's a good read if you don't have anything going on but not drop what you're doing when there's a new chapter.First off, don't expect the MC to be alone half the time even though the summary leads you to that expectation. All the reviews bashing the author/story about it is a bit much. Without spoiling it, there is a legitimate reason for Derek putting in quite a bit of effort for his companions. Anyone saying they wouldn't seek and treasure companionship after undergoing the same experience as MC is lying or a sociopath. I will reassure you that he does adventure off alone for a bit before he returns once had his introvert batteries filled. He does meet some interesting and decently fleshed out characters but it remains to be seen if they'll be developed beyond that.The author seems to have created a pretty big world for his MC. Even from the beginning, there are hints of a variety of exciting arcs that's building up in just book one. Unfortunately, there haven't been nay climatic battles or struggles for Derek. He's OP for all the conflicts he engages in. There has yet to be any situation where he's being suppressed by his opponent. Thus, no actual excitement to be had when reading his battles. Hopefully the author will change that soon as he'll have to move Derek to a stronger region or introduce comparatively strong antagonists because of his protagonist strength increase throughout book one. At the moment, it wouldn't be wrong to say a good percentage of the story can be perceived as slice of life.For the format of the story, it's overall pretty good. Great prose with little to no grammatical errors. Chapters length is nice and there aren't too much filler beyond the author’s constant display of ALL of Derek's status page. It's a bit annoying and you'll soon be skimming, if not skipping, past them since the author will mention any changes in his MC's thoughts.
First i feel interesting but 38 ch enough for this shit mcAmazing double system World travel Want to became "lone wolf" but "Playing hero" instead but dont want to full hero maybe 1/4 enough attitude Poor in the new world but give anything for free Simp mc but to nice lets call him "super simp"Low level but wasting time teaching a stupid stubborn kid Dropped I hate dao of dragging author
from a lone wolf, to a hero type carrying kids and a village with him and leveling them up etc... pretty disappointing
When he wasting time with thomas in dungeon That's it!Enough for me
Can someone tell me from which chapter MC will be overpowered? I don’t wanna waste my time reading him grinding leveling or whatever…
Uh chap 5 onwards
From what should have been a nice MC to a f#cking annoying and trash MC
From cool mc to pushover mc 2/5
The scribblehub reviews say ‘logical mc till about chapter 90 when it randomly turns into slice of life’ and ‘generic litrpg but a good one’
- Chapter 44: Hand Feeding
- Chapter 389: Of Course
- Chapter 394: Begin
- Chapter 397: Celebration
- Chapter 400: Tick Tock
- Chapter 1: Into the Portal
- Chapter 4: Thomas
- Chapter 7: Skills
- Chapter 10: Escape
- Chapter 13: Level Up
- Chapter 16: Void Call
- Chapter 19: After the Battle
- Chapter 22: Meeting
- Chapter 25: At the Edge
- Chapter 28: Dungeon
- Chapter 31: Gifts
- Chapter 34: Meeting
- Chapter 37: To the Dungeon
- Chapter 40: Afterwards
- Chapter 43: Follow Me
- Chapter 47: Rewards
- Chapter 50: Undying Dungeon: Begin
- Chapter 53: The Plan
- Chapter 56: Here We Go
- Chapter 59: Who's That Pok...?
- Chapter 62: Goodbye
- Chapter 65: Torith
- Chapter 68: Negotiations
- Chapter 71: Walter Gracefall
- Chapter 74: Discussion
- Chapter 77: Who's the Boss?
- Chapter 80: Adventurer's Guild
- Chapter 83: A Nice, Calm Chat
- Chapter 86: Back to the Crown
- Chapter 89: Alanah
- Chapter 92: Chatting with Alanah
- Chapter 95: Silvi's Reward
- Chapter 98: They Grow Up so Fast
- Chapter 101: Clare II
- Chapter 104: Hunting Zone
- Chapter 107: Mr. Hunt
- Chapter 110: King?
- Chapter 113: Derek, Dear...
- Chapter 116: Fury
- Chapter 119: *Spoiler*
- Chapter 122: Contracts
- Chapter 125: Undying Again
- Chapter 128: Let's Go for a Hunt
- Chapter 131: Your Turn
- Chapter 134: Cell #003
- Chapter 137: Leaving
- Chapter 140: I Won
- Chapter 143: Crown Hotel
- Chapter 146: The Dwarven Smith
- Chapter 149: The Bank of Savannah
- Chapter 152: Ranking Up
- Chapter 155: It's My Turn
- Chapter 158: The Brew
- Chapter 161: A New Day
- Chapter 164: Bidding War
- Chapter 167: Lesson
- Chapter 170: Potion of Physical Permanence
- Chapter 173: Under Construction
- Chapter 176: Royal Audience
- Chapter 179: Jake and Edgar
- Chapter 182: Father/Son Reunion
- Chapter 185: Final Preparations
- Chapter 188: Next Area
- Chapter 191: Boss Room
- Chapter 194: Edgar’s Dilemma
- Chapter 197: Breakthrough
- Chapter 200: More Questions than Answers
- Chapter 203: Maniac
- Chapter 206: Presentation
- Chapter 209: Bad Guy 101
- Chapter 212: Avery Steps In
- Chapter 215: Struggle
- Chapter 218: Sabrina Elras Part I
- Chapter 221: Lock Up
- Chapter 224: Day of the Auction
- Chapter 227: Regaining Honor
- Chapter 230: Auction
- Chapter 233: Auction Finale
- Side Story: Silvi Jacobs
- Chapter 237: Edgar's Request
- Chapter 240: Go
- Chapter 243: Setting Off
- Chapter 246: The First Trial
- Chapter 249: Grand Tour
- Chapter 252: No Free Meals
- Chapter 255: Jace II
- Chapter 258: All Smith
- System Universe Book 2: Torith is finally out!
- Chapter 263: Trial One - Complete
- Chapter 266: How to Control your Dragon
- Chapter 269: Stunned
- Chapter 272: Blitz
- Chapter 275: Dragon Rider
- Chapter 278: Mission: Complete
- Chapter 281: Agreement
- Chapter 284: Assistance
- Chapter 287: Skill Sharing
- Chapter 290: Void’s Harbinger
- Chapter 293: Trial Four
- Chapter 296: Unfortunate Return
- Chapter 298: The Bigger They Are
- Chapter 301: Clayton
- Chapter 304: When Bunnies Attack
- Chapter 307: Just Somebunny
- Chapter 310: Alanah
- Chapter 313: Alanah vs...
- Chapter 316: Dreams of the Past
- Chapter 319: Kind of a Big Deal
- Chapter 322: Breakthroughs
- Chapter 325: Bones and Ogre
- Chapter 327: Two Peas in a Pod
- Chapter 330: Starfury
- Chapter 333: Starfury's End
- Chapter 336: Dave
- Chapter 339: Return
- Chapter 342: Back Home
- Chapter 345: Dragon Ranchers
- Chapter 348: Retreat
- Chapter 352: The Normal Spiel
- Chapter 355:
- Chapter 358: Kingdom's Plan
- Chapter 361: Meeting
- Chapter 364: Concessions
- Chapter 367: One Down
- Chapter 370: Prepare for the Worst
- Chapter 373: Trigger Happy
- Chapter 376: Marrick
- Chapter 379: What Now?
- Chapter 382: Fate of the Siblings
- Chapter 385: Treasury
- Chapter 390: Silvi’s Initiative
- Chapter 403: Wouldn't Dare
- Chapter 406: Stand Back!
- Chapter 409: Roman and Freia
- Chapter 412: The Problem with Bonds
- Chapter 415: Not for Him
- Chapter 418: Soul Spear
- Chapter 421: Lesson for the Instructors
- Chapter 424: Student Row
- Chapter 427: Klaus
- Chapter 430: Clare, Zac, and Luke
- Chapter 432: All the Decisions
- Chapter 435: Old Goblin
- Chapter 439: Delivery
- Chapter 442: Merit
- Chapter 445: Let the Adventure Begin!
- Chapter 448: Skills
- Chapter 451: Derek’s Story I
- Chapter 454: The Plan
- Chapter 457: Priorities
- Chapter 460: 245
- Chapter 463: The Real Beast
- Chapter 466: New Boss?
- Chapter 469: Good Luck
- Chapter 472: Modestest
- Chapter 475: Border Town
- Chapter 478: Borrowing the Right Elf
- Chapter 481: What Was Left
- Chapter 484: Echoing Willow
- Chapter 487: Confrontation/Epilogue
- Chapter 489: Gone
- Chapter 492: To the Assassin’s Guild
- Chapter 350: Joining the Fray
- System Universe Book 5 is out today!
- Chapter 395: Cook the Food, Wear the hat
- Chapter 398: Estimated
- Chapter 401: Back
- Chapter 2: Into the Void
- Chapter 5: Awake
- Chapter 8: A Close Shave
- Chapter 11: Become an Asshole
- Chapter 14: Choosing a Class
- Chapter 17: Battle
- Chapter 20: Regroup
- Chapter 23: The Problem
- Chapter 26: Legendary Beast
- Chapter 29: Accident
- Chapter 32: A Day in the Village
- Chapter 35: Training
- Chapter 38: In the Dungeon
- Chapter 41: Cleanup
- Chapter 45: Like Clockwork
- Chapter 48: Stat Time
- Chapter 51: More Skills
- Chapter 54: I've Created a Monster
- Chapter 57: Investigate
- Chapter 60: Remember
- Chapter 63: To the City
- Chapter 66: The Crown
- Chapter 69: Enigma
- Chapter 72: Dinner Prep
- Chapter 75: About a Girl
- Chapter 78: Plans
- Chapter 81: Missions
- Chapter 84: Attack
- Chapter 87: Crown Membership
- Chapter 90: Value
- Chapter 93: Getting a Membership
- Chapter 96: Mission Probable
- Chapter 99: Intense Battle in the Kitchen
- Chapter 102: Fine Dining
- Chapter 105: Attack!
- Chapter 108: City Lord
- Chapter 111: Confrontation
- Chapter 114: Gerald
- Chapter 117: Race Against Time
- Chapter 120: The Show is Over
- Chapter 123: Rudy
- Chapter 126: Level 100
- Chapter 129: Carnage
- Chapter 132: Auras
- Chapter 135: Spreading Word
- Chapter 138: Ambush?
- Chapter 141: Wilmette
- Chapter 144: Property
- Chapter 147: Have a Nice Day
- Chapter 150: Thomas was Alone
- Chapter 153: Meeting Shae
- Chapter 156: Onyx
- Chapter 159: Fast Friends
- Chapter 162: Materials
- Chapter 165: Sealing the Deal
- Chapter 168: Potion Testing
- Chapter 171: Training Rayna
- Chapter 174: Tour
- Chapter 177: New Home
- Chapter 180: Attackers
- Chapter 183: Zephyr's Fury
- Chapter 186: News from the Crown Prince
- Chapter 189: Third Area
- Chapter 192: Start of Training
- Chapter 195: Edgar's Ability
- Chapter 198: Void Call
- Chapter 201: Edgar's Breakthrough
- Chapter 204: Suite
- Chapter 207: Tier Four
- Chapter 210: Return
- Chapter 213: Three vs One
- Chapter 216: Reinforcements
- Chapter 219: Sabrina Elras Part II
- Chapter 222: We Have Arrived at Your Destination
- Chapter 225: Like Father, Like Son
- Chapter 228: Favor
- Chapter 231: Auction II
- System Change (System Universe Book 1) Announcement! Now Available!
- Chapter 235: Skill Shopping
- Chapter 238: About a Raid
- Chapter 241: Final Preparations
- Chapter 244: Participants 25/25
- Chapter 247: Jace
- Chapter 250: Osian
- Chapter 253: How the Turns have Tabled
- Chapter 256: Avery vs. Tyron
- Chapter 259: Weapon Testing
- Chapter 261: Future
- Chapter 264: Trial #2
- Chapter 267: The Next Attack
- Chapter 270: Shared Experience
- Chapter 273: Post-Fight
- Chapter 276: Derek's New Plan
- Chapter 279: Hindsight
- Chapter 282: Rocky
- Chapter 285: Evolution
- Chapter 288: Circulation
- Chapter 291: Weapon Bond
- Chapter 294: A Whale of a Battle
- System Universe Book 3: Savannah is out!
- Chapter 299: Broken Contracts
- Chapter 302: Pressure
- Chapter 305: Are You Safe Now?
- Chapter 308: Can You Eat It?
- Chapter 311: Marcus
- Chapter 314: Metamorphosis
- Chapter 317: Readying
- Chapter 320: Fight!
- Chapter 323: One
- Chapter 326: Employees
- Chapter 328: Preparation Timer Depleted
- Chapter 331: Wearing Down
- Chapter 334: Post Fight
- Chapter 337: Dave II
- Chapter 340: Kelvin's Complaints
- Chapter 343: Finally Back
- Chapter 346: Traps
- Chapter 349: Overwhelming Force
- Chapter 353: Ice
- Chapter 356: Slanderous Accusations
- Chapter 359: Tests
- Chapter 362: Decision
- Chapter 365: Marriage?
- Chapter 368: I'll Tame It
- Chapter 371: Icecrest
- Chapter 374: Watch
- Chapter 377: Cassandra
- Chapter 380: Blow it up?
- Chapter 383: New Leadership
- Chapter 386: Heist
- Chapter 391: Stop Scaring Customers
- Chapter 404: I’m Legendary!
- Chapter 407: One Was Enough
- Chapter 410: The Doghouse
- Chapter 413: Crunching Numbers and Monsters
- Chapter 416: The Academy
- Chapter 419: Instructor Hunt
- Chapter 422: What Did You Learn?
- Chapter 425: Cain
- Chapter 428: Fascinating
- System Univers Book 6 is Out Now!
- Chapter 433: Instructions Unclear
- Chapter 436: Alabaster homes
- Chapter 440: Rude
- Chapter 443: Eloria?
- Chapter 446: Duo Diver
- Chapter 449: Secrets
- Chapter 452: Derek’s Story II
- Chapter 455: Deathsworn
- Chapter 458: A Poultry Dungeon
- Chapter 461: The Impossible
- Chapter 464: Unexpected
- Chapter 467: Asher
- Chapter 470: Over the Sea
- Chapter 473: Knick Knack
- Chapter 476: Strange Gathering
- Chapter 479: Echoing Willow
- Chapter 482: Assemble
- Chapter 485: Ignite
- Book 7 of System Universe is out today!
- Chapter 490: Renovations
- Chapter 493: The Assassin’s Guild
- Chapter 387: Efficient
- Chapter 393: Kennel
- Chapter 396: Ceremony
- Chapter 399: It's Good, Right?
- Chapter 402: What Did You Do?
- Chapter 3: The Kind Stranger
- Chapter 6: Unlocking the System
- Chapter 9: Through the Forest
- Chapter 12: Bloody Village
- Chapter 15: Champion of the Void
- Chapter 18: Strength of the Void
- Chapter 21: Home
- Chapter 24: Anomaly
- Chapter 27: Growth
- Chapter 30: Return
- Chapter 33: The Next Day
- Chapter 36: Leaving
- Chapter 39: Dungeon Run
- Chapter 42: What to Do
- Chapter 46: Complete
- Chapter 49: To the Undying Dungeon
- Chapter 52: Ghouls!
- Chapter 55: It's Time
- Chapter 58: I Choose You!
- Chapter 61: Last Day in the Village
- Chapter 64: Interlude/Anomaly II
- Chapter 67: More Business
- Chapter 70: Gracefall Manor
- Chapter 73: Dinner with Walter
- Chapter 76: Thanks for the Meal
- Chapter 79: Room and Board
- Chapter 82: Hunting
- Chapter 85: Becoming Official
- Chapter 88: The True Value of Void Beasts
- Chapter 91: Price
- Chapter 94: Inncoming
- Chapter 97: Silvi's First Day
- Chapter 100: Clare
- Chapter 103: Days Gone By
- Chapter 106: Just One More
- Chapter 109: Heart to Heart
- Chapter 112: Zachary and Lucas
- Chapter 115: Preparing to Leave
- Chapter 118: First Time Meeting Katrisha
- Chapter 121: Oathbreaker
- Chapter 124: See You in a Bit
- Chapter 127: Skill Testing
- Chapter 130: Captain Herrett
- Chapter 133: It's Time
- Chapter 136: Natalie
- Chapter 139: Bones and Ogre
- Chapter 142: Arriving at Savannah
- Chapter 145: Lot 33,801
- Chapter 148: Getting Paid
- Chapter 151: Shae
- Chapter 154: Spar
- Chapter 157: Roman
- Chapter 160: Debriefing
- Chapter 163: The Contractors
- Chapter 166: Roman's Potions and Brews
- Chapter 169: Potion Testing II
- Chapter 172: Apes
- Chapter 175: King Edwin
- Chapter 178: Can I Help You?
- Chapter 181: Somewhat of a Prince
- Chapter 184: Preparations
- Chapter 187: Golem Dungeon
- Chapter 190: Earth Golem
- Chapter 193: Crown's Decision
- Chapter 196: Level Up
- Chapter 199: Void Farm
- Chapter 202: Going Home
- Chapter 205: First Meeting
- Chapter 208: Alanah's Gathering
- Chapter 211: Confrontation
- Chapter 214: First
- Chapter 217: 3v3
- Chapter 220: Loose Lips Sink Ships
- Chapter 223: Making Rounds
- Chapter 226: Honor
- Chapter 229: Change of pace
- Chapter 232: The Walking Forge
- Chapter 234: Transactions
- Chapter 236: Wrapped Up
- Chapter 239: You Get a Scroll, You Get a Scroll!
- Chapter 242: Potion of Mental Permanence
- Chapter 245: Trials
- Chapter 248: Making Camp
- Chapter 251: The Void Emporium
- Chapter 254: Planetary Siege
- Chapter 257: Trust Me
- Chapter 260: Welcome to the Academy
- Chapter 262: It Begins
- Chapter 265: The (Real) Legendary Beasts
- Chapter 268: First Contact
- Chapter 271: How to Tame Your Dragon
- Chapter 274: Lyra
- Chapter 277: Gotta Catch ’Em All
- Chapter 280: To Bribe a Smith
- Chapter 283: Final Preparations
- Chapter 286: Silvi's Evolution
- Chapter 289: Casualty
- Chapter 292: Contract Ended
- Chapter 295: Don’t Whale on Me!
- Chapter 297: War Efforts
- Chapter 300: The System Laughs
- Chapter 303: Void Travel
- Chapter 306: Make a List
- Chapter 309: Stop!
- Chapter 312: Kill
- Chapter 315: Dawn Siren
- Chapter 318: Mine's Better
- Chapter 321: Meatshield
- Chapter 324: Countdown
- System Universe 4: Trials of Cydaria out today!
- Chapter 329: Raid Boss
- Chapter 332: Final Moves
- Chapter 335: Leaving?
- Chapter 338: Dave III
- Chapter 341: Hitching a Ride
- Chapter 344: Deal!
- Chapter 347: Void Travel
- Chapter 351: Derek vs. Duke
- Chapter 354: Ice and... Fire?
- Chapter 357: Palace
- Chapter 360: A Bad Time
- Chapter 363: Soul Contracts
- Chapter 366: Taxi
- Chapter 369: Taking Off
- Chapter 372: Not Giving a Damn
- Chapter 375: Charge and Chop
- Chapter 378: One By One
- Chapter 381: Try This
- Chapter 384: Mandatory Gathering
- Chapter 388: As Thick as Thieves
- Chapter 392: Singed
- Chapter 405: Brandi's Skills
- Chapter 408: Research to be Had
- Chapter 411: Just to Say
- Chapter 414: Books
- Chapter 417: Arena
- Chapter 420: Test of Will
- Chapter 423: Growing Up
- Chapter 426: …and Whatnot
- Chapter 429: Great Team
- Chapter 431: Comfortable
- Chapter 434: Change in the Kingdom
- Chapter 438: Spoiled
- Chapter 441: Antsy
- Chapter 444: Cordonia
- Chapter 447: Worth It
- Chapter 450: Requirements
- Chapter 453: Derek’s Story III (Final)
- Chapter 456: Making Gains
- Chapter 459: Juicy Birds
- Chapter 462: We Wait
- Chapter 465: It's Your Show
- Chapter 468: Survival of the Strongest
- Chapter 471: My Dumb Friend
- Chapter 474: Never Again
- Chapter 477: just Another Elf
- Chapter 480: Dig
- Chapter 483: Approach
- Chapter 486: World Boss
- Chapter 488: Prologue Book 8
- Chapter 491: Making Good