Mozo
He is a successful writer who has created a fantasy world in his novel. But he made a terrible... Read more
He is a successful writer who has created a fantasy world in his novel. But he made a terrible mistake in the end, causing the protagonist to reveal himself as a traitor and the world to be dominated by the demon king. He received the wrath of readers and regretted his choice.Then he woke up in his own novel, in the body of the villain Shin Kang Ho, a ruthless killer who works for the demon king. He is five years before the disastrous ending, and has the chance to change the fate of the world. But Kang Ho has no intention of being a hero. He knows the world is cruel and full of greed. So he decide to use his talent and knowledge to achieve everything you can, without caring about others.Kang Ho will devour all the resources, rewards, skills and treasures he finds on his way. He will become the strongest and richest of all. Collapse
Adapted to Manhwa, Assassins, Guilds, Hunters, Male Protagonist, Monsters, Transmigration, Writers, Genius Protagonist, Strong to Stronger
#panik# Broken chapter
Hope the panic left your secondary account
Ah yes the constellations. Honestly pretty OP mc but honestly it feels like your normal average korean novel at this point
Don't you hate it when you remember your dog was put down after you've already slathered your balls in peanut butter?
Please man, stop talking to your reflection, this is getting creepy.
RavensDagger
In the year 2057, the world has become a corporate-run utopia for the super-rich, and a hellhole... Read more
In the year 2057, the world has become a corporate-run utopia for the super-rich, and a hellhole for all the rest. Catherine 'Cat' Leblanc is an orphan that is about as far from super-rich as one can be. When the Incursion alarms start blaring and the sky starts raining hungry xenos, it's just another blemish on an already piss-poor afternoon. ***A cyberpunk magical-girl alien-invasion LitRPG.It’s exactly as wild as it sounds. Collapse
Aliens, Corruption, Cyberpunk, Disabilities, Earth Invasion, Evil Organizations, Female Protagonist, Game Elements, Game Ranking System, Magical Girls, Orphans, Pragmatic Protagonist, LitRPG
It's good light story with downsides.1) Cyberpunk very little part of it. It's have cyberpunk skin but not cyberpunk flesh.2) Story flow are smooth but only 1 event per chapter. Other novels describe dinner as one chapter, this one gives you one chapter of recipe choose, one of cooking and one of eating. Not a problem to binge read but feels like problem when awaiting new chapters.3) System are cool and unique a little but mc just doesn't use its near omnipotence. System here an alien shop with super ai companion. System user get points by killing aliens and spend points to buy some hight tech alien stuff. Mc here never explore this shop and never spend more than 10 minutes to choose smth. She just ask her ai new grenades with effects like black hole, big booms or smth else. Once a volume she ask new armour and gun.4) Mc just reject any plans or common sense till she will be near death. She hoard points to get deal with unexpected situations but every situation for her is unexpected because she havent real specialisation. She buy armour only after couple of new holes in her body. She start train aim only being forced. She even delay upgrading main implant (that control other and using as smartphone) and getting new arm in first chapters.All above make everything extremely slow and forcibly restrained. 300 chaps here feels like 50. But i can't say it's bad. I got entertainment enough from this novel.
Epilogue? Book is end?
Can someone tell me is this good or bad story??
at the very least, i remember the author having a few good stories... dunno about this one though.gl
Okk
Okay, it's a fresh take on a post apocalyptic world. Cat the MC, via virtue of being not a asshole was chosen to help fight off alien/monster invasions.It's not exactly a unique story...The MC is a orphan to be Hero! Except in this case she's, also a cripple missing a arm, and she gets f#cking malware from a museum in her cybernetic implantat eye like five minutes in.Story's pretty good, nice character interaction, no real Grammer issue either. This story the bad things get progressively worse, rather than all of a sudden the MC has randomly antagonized the final bad guy before chapter 10 which is becoming common.
As a side note its set in 2057, if you want to compare dates with the anecdotes every chapter.
RavensDagger
The world called out for a hero to purge it of a great evil. It received Broccoli Bunch, explorer,... Read more
The world called out for a hero to purge it of a great evil. It received Broccoli Bunch, explorer, expert cleaner, occasional ghost-buster, and full time Cinnamon Bun.Features include:Talking enemies into becoming friendsHugging menu boxesAwesome overpowered skills (such as Cleaning, and Gardening)And more adventure than you could shake a stick at!Follow Broccoli on her personal quest to make all the friends. All of them.Updates: Monday, Wednesday, Friday! Collapse
Adventurers, Comedic Undertone, Curious Protagonist, Cute Protagonist, Cute Story, Dungeons, Female Protagonist, Game Elements, Ghosts, Hard-Working Protagonist, Polite Protagonist, LitRPG
MC is unnaturaly happy all the time. She doesn't feel bad about leaving her family, friends and old world for adventure but felt bad about killing a ghost who tried to kill her. Good read for new readers and some casual readers.
The vibe is pretty similar to Delta from No Epic Loot Here, Only Puns ? GO BROCOLI
os comentários não dizem muito, então vou esperar alguém ler mais e depois comentar sobre
#panic# Starting from chapter 45, there is no content for the chapters themselves.
I really liked this novel at the time of reading it on another site, because it seemed everyone and their mother had to do a dark, revenge seeking, anti hero protagonist.Then comes the happy go lucky Broccoli Bunch, with her somewhat hippie vibes, and cheerful personality was a breath of fresh air. She has good character interaction and the story flowed pretty well.
Enemies to friends woohoo
Loskro1
Nicholas Iron died under mysterious circumstances on Earth, and was reborn in the world of Harry... Read more
Nicholas Iron died under mysterious circumstances on Earth, and was reborn in the world of Harry Potter as an orphan with a mysterious ring creation system. He doesn't know why he's here and why he needs this system, but he intends to make the most of his new life, and damn all these curious freaks. Collapse
Artifact Crafting, Blacksmith, Calm Protagonist, Male Protagonist, System, Transmigration, Modern Knowledge, Alternate World, European Ambience, Magic, Fanfiction, Harry Potter, Fantasy Creatures, Academy, Weak to Strong
Not actually a system novel, the author drops it after he redeems his first set of points as far as I can tell (im on chap 168). Disappointing way of retconning.
It does have system elements in it but unlike other system novels that are system heavy this one is very chill about it. To me its a nice change for the usual systems
After reading more it seems your right, there is a weird space of around 200 chapters in which the author avoids it heavily
Story was ok at first, but why bring in stuff from LOR and Oblivion, and other stuff. It got stupid really fast
Im a few chapters in, where's Hermione? Did Author not want her?
Nevermind I found her
found this comment funny
I’ll be honest first ~50 or so chapters are barely passable 3.5 star (70%) work. It’s awkward, has pacing issues, and quality is all over the place. Some early chapters make me want to throw a 1 or 2 star at them. Yet it does get better.Past ch50 and after the author’s rant it gets that little spark of magic and past ch100 it starts to open its wings and a does more of it’s own thing in interesting ways while the chapters get more substance. Almost all the awkward shit is worked out, the author gets their shit together, and the world building starts getting good. I’d definitely bump the quality up to 4 stars or even a bit more where I’m at at ch 200(I have caught up to 396, quality is still slowly rising). Past that we get introduced to a lot of new original content with some themes we will all find familiar but rarely applied to the HP world.It’s no legendary novel, but after MC gets to hogwarts and settles in it becomes evident why the novel is still alive and getting to ch400 soon, if it stayed as bad as it started or got worse it would have died long ago. If you get past the author’s noob starting phase it is a decent novel to pass the time.
I’m 130 chapters in and the mc has used his system twice. He has a system shop which he can use to buy pretty much anything he’d ever need not even exclusive to the HP world but he’s only used it once and it was to gamble. If u ignore that one glaring issue this is a pretty solid fanfic. I just wish the author at least put a limit on how much he can use the system as an excuse in the beginning instead of having him just not use it.
I’m all caught up and honestly I got over the issues I had with the first 100 chaps. The author does love drawing things out tho. Overall pretty solid hp fanfic
Sheeeeeeeeeesh ?Bro in the cover got that drip??
Sigh Course It Harry Potter Fanfic.....When You Go To Fanfictions And Crossovers This Genre Of Harry Potter Has More Stories Than Actual Original Animes And Novels?
That's just accumulation because HP was popular when the Internet and fanfiction became a thing 15-20 years ago
Yeah But It Suck Now....I Used To Read Them 2012 But Now....When I See Harry Potter Fics I Turn Another Way
Is it worth reading? And is the grammar and english readible?
I would say so, I quite liked it. It's essentially the MC is placed into an Orphanage in the HP world with a "gacha" system that after used the first time, he got Celebrimbors memories on how to make powerful magical rings. He also has essentially the spirit of Celebrimbor guiding him inside his mindscape. It's pretty "slow" paced though with it being I believe second year still, but it is made up with there being I think 2 chapters a day. He also get's more methods on making items. The system eventually gave him another way to create items besides Celebrimbors style later on but it hasn't been too explored as far as I know.
it may sound crazy, but since I have posted my previous statement I have read the entire book down to the last chapter.
Bro don’t leave us hanging, what wisdom have you acquired? Should we follow you or evacuate?
It's decent. Not the best. But definitely not the worst harrry potter fanfic I have read, so 3 1/2 stars out a 5
70% is passing, thank you comrade
The Mandarin
Ollivander about to get some serious competition(This novel doesn't excite me but it's a hp fanfiction and a system novelSo I have to read it by law)Ranobe fan made discord server- Spoilerhttps://discord.gg/pRjCestc96
Woo-Gak
The great journey of an ordinary martial artist. “Once your habit is tainted, you have no... Read more
The great journey of an ordinary martial artist.“Once your habit is tainted, you have no choice but to live as a dog forever. Do not turn the wolf inside you into a dog.” Collapse
Adapted to Manhwa, Male Protagonist, Sword Wielder, Weak to Strong
wow did not know that the author is the same as the drifting reaper and northen blade
Lmao, the comments here are amazing! Though is the novel any good?
I haven't read the novel but the manhwa is good
finally it's here can't wait to pick it from where the manhwa unfortunately ended
The manhwa for this is really good
MartialArtistLeeGAWK GAWK GAWK.?????? Ranobe FanMade discord server :))
You've seen martial artist Lee Gwak, but have you met his brother, martial artist Lee Quack ?
I wish the translations of the author's other novels were completed. Same Universe
How do you turn a fruit into a vegetable?Aids.
damn that's both pretty messed up, and pretty tame considering your other ones
But how do you turn the wolf inside you into a dog?
Zoophilia
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Why tf did I laugh?
Your mind is already lost, fellow Taoists...
Can't lose what I don't have
Didn't get that one
Seras
Night City, it's a place of endless wonders and horrors. Opportunities and dangers, but before... Read more
Night City, it's a place of endless wonders and horrors. Opportunities and dangers, but before Motoko Kusanagi can access any of them. She first has to build up enough strength to walk again. Learn the basics of living in a world that was just a game to her before. Good thing she found a Shard hidden in her stuff that opens the door of opportunity. But like all opportunities in Night City, it usually ends up in a gunfight.Self-Insert with a modified Cyberpunk 2077 Gamer System. Not a direct Ghost in the Shell Crossover. MC just happens to share the name. Collapse
LitRPG, Reincarnation, Female Protagonist, Cyberpunk, Dystopia, Futuristic Setting, Game Elements, Weak to Strong
Well now I know that 8 hour sleep is important
It's the best Cyberpunk 2077 fanfiction I've read.
solid 4 would be 5 if not for some small system problems and some parts of character building but in general a well written story with well developed characters. it gives you a new look for cyberpunk in its own pace. i love the mc she is great , smart , fun (sometimes awkward) but you can really get this character and put it in nightcity without any problem. she is fit for her role the love interest are building up in many directions but its not the only focus the trauma of her part is nice how she feels lonely sometimes to how fun and live she is. (also in brackets i love sexy motoko for those who get it xd) in summary at chapter 100 you have an mc with a mild to good reputation in night city she is still developing but she is already a badass im really glad for this story to have developed this much and i had the chance to read it thx seras-san ^^
my one gripe with it is the system and that's it i love everything thing else it has flaws but it's a lot fun read
It's worth to try
For the whole novel, I never understood what her balance is and how much she gets from concerts. This knch is a huge minus
There's a lot to like about the novel. I personally enjoyed the exploration of cyber psychosis, and netrunning. Generally the fic revels in exploring and enjoying Night City without all the drama and issues that other fics run into with V/Silverhand as MCs, This leads to a sort of mash up between murderhobo-ing and slice of life fluff, which is honestly right up my ally as a fan of power/progression fantasy and slice of life novels.The novel isn't the most serious of things, and you might find the regular references and occasional meme a little eye rolly. A fair bit of music is referenced as well that led me to youtube to find.All in all I found the work pretty thematic, and good for casual enjoyment. Its no Shawshank Redemption, but compared to the majority of chaff novels around, it stands out in a positive way. Overall I really liked it 4.5/5
Also since I liked this novel I tried to find other stuff similar to it, but everything I found was generally worse.Still if you want some other option's Stray Cat Strut by Ravensdagger is very similar in terms of cyberpunk+ progression fantasy+ slice of life + Female MC. Personally I found it a little too hard focused on the "action" which got a little samey with constantly killing aliens or w/e. But ymmv.Otherwise Seras' previous novel: Pokemon Trainer Vicky is pretty solid too , if obviously much different settings wise, but otherwise "feels" very similar. It was abandoned when Seras started writing this novel, but whats there is worthwhile.
1 Star ratings are from XXL burrito fans.This is a pretty good Cyberpunk 2077 fanfic with a system, decent character work, and pretty coherent lore. The start is really strong after a few chapters, cools off a bit as MC gets stronger and the latest arc has been starting wars in the comment section. The comment section on RR also has a lot of author interaction if you ever want official answers to stuff. Definitely binge worthy with a mix of harsh cyberpunk world and cozy slice of life stat grinding.
Spacebattles ??????? ??????
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[Will you accept the special quest “Idol – Cheon Yise”?] Lim Hyunsung, “Master of... Read more
[Will you accept the special quest “Idol – Cheon Yise”?] Lim Hyunsung, “Master of Taste”, who pioneered the myth of the restaurant industry. After being killed in some kind of incident, he possesses an idol according to the guidance of an unidentified system.“This guy… he’s been a failed idol for 5 years?”Will he be able to save this failed idol with his own hands? Collapse
Adapted to Manhwa, Celebrities, Game Elements, Male Protagonist, Modern Day, Showbiz, Transmigration
Incredible, this novel is so ignored, that even after weeks after the new delivery of the novels, being on the front page, it has not won a single evaluation and only one comment.
Established: 6 June year 2321:40
Valerios
Explore the Universe through the hardest, truest weapon: the Fist. Jack Rust was a... Read more
Explore the Universe through the hardest, truest weapon: the Fist.Jack Rust was a disillusioned biologist with a PhD—almost. When an extraterrestrial AI calling itself the System invaded Earth and thrust it into a world of aliens and violence, the least Jack hoped for was magic. Unfortunately, the System decided to spawn a forest dungeon around him and a goblin in his face, which left him little choice.Armed with nothing but his fists, Jack must grow strong enough to survive entire menageries of monsters. He needs to return to civilization and find out what the hell is going on. He might also get magic—or not. Surprising himself, Jack discovers that violence is fun.In this battle-ridden new world, Jack finds the life he always dreamed about. He won’t just survive. He will thrive. Collapse
GameLit, High Fantasy, LitRPG, Magic, Male Protagonist, Mythology, Progression, Overpowered Protagonist, Aliens, Fantasy Creatures, Survival, System, Alternate World, Apocalypse, Dungeons, Monsters, Weak to Strong
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as of chapter 82, started of as a good litrpg beginning, maybe a bit cliche starting of inside a dungeon but it was well written. mc takes the path of a beserker/puligist type fighter which in my opinion is boring but there are worse jobs i guess.now the bad part/pet peevesmc is puligist which makes the fights just a matter of: i punch harder and dodge attacks and sometimes i just tank hits while i punch. extremely boring after 5 fights or so, i had hopes that maybe with his dream of being a mage there would be some elemental punches and reactions to spice things up but no.MC is supposed to be smart (phd) yet acts like someone with a negative IQ eg. stupid choices while fighting then after the dao root of the fist that suddenly influences his choices and feelings and even when it has been shown to him that he needs to control those impulses it's more like "I need to control this .... anyway" this happens at least 2 times so far.then in the tournament arc he gets a good teacher (d rank) while he is still f rank and instead of listening to him he does the dumbest shite ever and insults one of the main antagonists so far and pretty much dooms his faction. then instead of doing anything to fix it he goes and whines to his teacher who basically goes "tough shit but that's your problem" which is extremely understandable since he is not even from the same galaxy but somehow that destroys the growing relationship they had according to MC.anyway now that i have ranted a bit this is my opinion: okay litrpg with dumb mc who doesn't seem to learn from mistakes.tldr: it's okay
Your comment describes boxers like the mechanic han, a bunch of brains and brawn who are the least thinking class
that's because most of the time a beserker will have some skill or attribute which will increase bloodlust thereby reducing the amount of thinking they do. and to be honest this MC has a lack of thinking al around even though the author tries to give him vibes that he can think. however all problems are solved by just beating up the enemy so what use is strategy at that point.
Well that's why Monk in DND is best
Harambe is real and canon in this story, anything else needed?
Yes. An actual story.
For some reason, the picture gives me John Cena vibes excluding the head.
Wanted to enjoy but MC is retarded and feels like he thinks he’s smarter than everyone for almost getting a PhD while actually being dumb af
Yo does anyone know about a slice of life litrpg novel?
Another man with one blow? Recently I complained about an overabundance of swordsmen. I was wrong. I can't remember anything interesting where the hero relies on a fist, usually it quickly becomes boring and drops safely. We need more swordsmen.
While fists might not be the most entertaining, you are actually insane if you think MORE SWORDS is the answer. So many sword novels, and IMO they have just gotten so boring I don't usually even bother with them unless they are WAY higher quality novels.
Facts. We need more cowbell
We need novels where main characters uses unconventional weapons like steel bar, hammer, metal bat, chain, barbed chain and so on
We need novels where the MC will use Dildos, Flesh-lights, Nipple Clamps, Vibrators, Staplers, Paper Clips, Forks, Spoons, Sporks, Testicles, Boobs, Ovaries, Cream of any kind, Semen, Pubic Hair, Sandals, Belts, Brushes, Chairs, Screwdrivers, Umbrellas, Water Bottles, Peanuts, Honey, Flowers, Bed Mattress, Lamps, Hangers, Boxes, and many more different weapons that i cant think of right now. Whose with me?
Rank: C-
This is alright so far, it’s quite similar to Defiance of the Fall and New World
This PhD shit is a scam in all of the novels
Man u spitting facts
WolfShine
When a Demonic Assault occurs, most people stuck inside of a Fracture end up hiding inside of a... Read more
When a Demonic Assault occurs, most people stuck inside of a Fracture end up hiding inside of a bunker in the hopes that they don’t end up killed by a demon.Others might even hope for the slightest possible chance at signing a contract with a spirit and becoming a Guardian.What they don’t expect is to become a demon themselves.Exactly two centuries ago, humanity was struck with their very first Demonic Assault.The skies above the capital of the US, shattering as if made of glass; demons of all kinds appearing out of nowhere; and no way to effectively stop them before the end of the Assault.On the brink of devastation, some of the humans managed to find themselves offered a contract whilst inside of a Fracture.Who these beings are that are offering these contracts, the humans don’t know. Nor do they care.All they care about is that by becoming a Guardian, they were offered a chance.A chance to rebuild.A chance at life.And, in the case of those Guardians, a chance at power, fame, and fortune.Now, long after every nation of the world joined together to form the Terran Republic, Scarlet finds herself stuck trying to find a university from the Republic’s capital that will accept someone from a lower tier city into their midst.But, as if that wasn’t already enough trouble for one person to bear, she somehow ends up stuck in one of the Fractures of a Demonic Assault while visiting her father figure’s company building.However, she doesn't perish in the darkness and rather awakens her dormant bloodline as a noble demon.A Blood Lycan.Turns out she had been a demon all along and had literally been born for the apocalypse.***What to expect: LitRPG, Progression, Lycanthrope MC, Blood Magic, half-demon gradually turning full demon MC lest they find a way to stop it. And while the story does have the sci-fi tag, and feels relatively sci-fi, it technically isn't sci-fi, since the 'advanced technology' in the story is simply regular technology enhanced to do what it normally wouldn't be able to do through magic and skills.One thing you will never see in any of my stories is betrayal by a loved one. I hate that with a passion. There will also be no romance, and the story does not have a superhero tag because the vast majority of the Guardians are publicly known to only be fighting the demons to grow stronger and not out of any actual desire to save people.Also, despite Scarlet trying to and then going to a University, there is no school arc.3 chapters daily. Collapse
Apocalyptic, Antihero Protagonist, Non-human Protagonist, Dystopia, Female Protagonist, Game Elements, Low Fantasy, Magic, Mythology, Secret Identity, Soft Sci-fi, Overpowered Protagonist, Weak to Strong
without the author rants/clarifications that Royalroad has reading this here is a better experience overall.
ch92 so far.Started out pretty good but the MC is turning out to be a rather weak and spineless girl, yet still portrayed as being this strong and confident woman. Mostly she just seems like she's a sheltered, overdramatic teen that's does whatever her family tells her to.Same with her father figure. He's supposed to be this capable and intelligent CEO but acts like a wimp around the women in his life.And I don't mean that he's not acting like an overbearing chauvinistic ass. I mean he just wilts in front of the females in his life and pampers them.But he also has moments when he chews out his daughters? I don't know. It's not consistent. I'll see how it goes.
Up to book2, ch47.The anime is strong in this one. Also a lot of unnecessarily repeated information. Sometimes within the same paragraph-long phrase.It's not as bad as kidian/webnovel garbage filler novels but it's pretty consistent nonetheless.Story is alright but the repetition is getting pretty annoying. And yes, the trope of girls and shopping is living well in here despite her ostensibly hating such things. And she said the equivalent of "f#ck the poor" lol. Such a shallow character. I'm just in it for the action and system at this point.
Meh, I'm dropping it at ch49. Just got tired of the repetitive writing style and dumb things. The story is okay but not really good enough for me to hang on through the annoying things or unadmirable characters.
This is update speed readers hope from every author 3chaps a day
the chapters are already available on Royal Road, it is normal that they publish a lot to catch up with the rhythm of the author
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A long synopsis...? How long has it been...
This looks like a vampire disguised as a wolf plus the synopsis basically made the first chapter completely irrelevant lol.
Seems really interesting, any dear poison tester's opinnion?
Exemplar
Somebody once told a joke. A man ran in place all his life. He worked a job he didn't... Read more
Somebody once told a joke.A man ran in place all his life. He worked a job he didn't love for people he couldn't stand. But at the end of the day, the number in his bank account went up.That man got a second chance at life. He woke up in another world, full of adventures and romances and monsters and gods. And floating above his head he saw the number "1". So what did he say?"Gosh I better make the number go up."Not today. Not for this old soul. Reborn as a beast of battle meant to live a short life and die screaming, Garek refuses. He puts the madness of skills and levels behind him and sets out to found a little farmstead. He grows crops. Maybe someday he'll get a pig, and have bacon.It's a shame the world won't let him be. It's a shame that the warmongers and level-grinders hate nothing more than a soul at peace.He put down his sword for a plowshare, but when trouble comes calling, he'll pick it up again. Collapse
Game Elements, High Fantasy, LitRPG, Male Protagonist, Non-human Protagonist, Character Growth, Reincarnated as a Monster, Overpowered Protagonist, Level System, Medieval
Where can I read the raw chapters?
On RoyalRoad, where I post this story.
Hey author, I was checking latest chapter and saw your post. Ranobes contains your patreon and RR novel page in Links.Well, not discord links tho.
Yeah i edited the RR text to reflect that once I had seen, but Ranobes doesn't update text bodies once they're updated on RR so it won't reflect that here. Honestly, the biggest thing I'm concerned about is Kindle. If you want to put your book on there to move into the Amazon marketplace, Kindle requires 80% of your content in said book to be removed from the internet, and I don't have the option to do that on Ranobes aside from being an ass and sending a DCMA claim.
It's not here with your consent, so i hope kindle won't hold u responsible for thisDon't acknowledge this site
Neat story, worth a read.Not filled with the obverse, all-too-common comedy tropes that typically grace the [Comedy] tag, nor is the story and characters based solely on jokes.Rather, the novel employes casual humor in measured doses. Honestly, it's not much different from most novels without the [Comedy] tag. It just doesn't take itself as seriously as those whose themes aren't suitable for comedy or focus on MC's who are too proud, dignified or serious to laugh at anything but the enemies they grind beneath their boots.Instead, this novel is better described by the action, adventure, and slice of life tags.
Is slice of life boring to you
Depends. Some regular things in life bore me. Others do not. And how the author handles it can make a big difference.
Amusing BoC clone. Honestly the LitRPG elements take away from the story though, since MC doesn’t really care about them
I shoulda just named it Beware of Cow
That would make my day
Rank B+(for veteran readers wue enjoyed beware of chicken)
Beware Of Chicken is top notch!
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The Era of Dungeon Conquest has finally arrived. The Seven Deadly Dungeons of Evil.... Read more
The Era of Dungeon Conquest has finally arrived.The Seven Deadly Dungeons of Evil.These are the strongest seven dungeons, considered virtually impossible to conquer, even more challenging than S-class dungeons.Among them, the most notorious is the ‘Ancient Core,’ deep within which lives the worst boss monster in history.‘Isn’t it your duty to prevent them from reaching my room?!’Even though I’m already doing nothing, I want to do nothing even more intensely!This is the struggle of a boss monster who just wants to rest in peace! Collapse
Adapted to Manhwa, Dungeon Master, Dungeons, Male Protagonist, Overpowered Protagonist, Protagonist Strong from the Start, Misunderstandings
Have you ever been SWALLOWED
Just saw this line in novelupdates Status in COO12 Volumes / 394 Chapters (Discontinued):-Part 1: 10 Volumes / 349 Chapters (Completed)-Side Story: 1 Volume / 25 Chapters (Completed)-Part 2: 1 Volume / 20 Chapters (Discontinued)Discontinued due to author's passing Hope the author is in a better place
Oh shit...man...that sucks....hopefully Author's loved ones are doing alright
Damn! RIP
Mr Swallow sounds a little....
It's been quite long time, since dungeon core novel was added. Noice
So an older man, after years of being miserable with his wife, finally gets a divorce. Now this man has been without s*x (thanks to his cold-hearted b*tch of an ex-wife) for several years and he decides he's going to celebrate the divorce by getting a h**ker and finally getting some *ss.He's strolling down the road in a bad part of town trying to find a hooker that's at least moderately attractive (If he's going to pay for s*x she should at least be hot, right?). He finally finds a woman worth spending money on and they make their way to the motel.The second they get in the room he can't keep his hands off of her. They rip each others clothes off and she gets on top of him. As she's riding him, he starts to notice that it's a little uncomfortable."I'm sorry, but you're incredibly dry down there. It feels like I'm jacking off with sandpaper. Is there anything you can do about that?"The h**ker thinks for a second and gets an idea. She excitedly runs into the bathroom and slams the door behind her. After about 5 minutes she comes out and gets back on top of him.It's the wettest, sloppiest, best s*x the man has ever had and he cums in seconds flat. He pays her for the night and they screw for hours and hours with her disappearing back to the bathroom from time to time.After all is said and done, the man asks her "That was amazing! What did you do to fix being so dry?!"To which the woman responds, "Oh, I just had to pick off the scabs..."
Was that actually in the story or was I baited into reading that...
Bleh I hope you suffer well ?You owe me this rubbish!!!
Read the Manhwa on Asura Scans, and its Mr Devourer not Mr Swallow (Mr Devourer, Please Act Like a Final Boss)
#panic#
Douglas M
Carlos was an ordinary software engineer on Earth, up until he died and found himself in a fantasy... Read more
Carlos was an ordinary software engineer on Earth, up until he died and found himself in a fantasy world of dungeons, magic, and adventure. This new world offers many fascinating possibilities, but it's unfortunate that the skills he spent much of his life developing will be useless because they don't have computers.Wait, why does this spell incantation read like a computer program's source code? Magic is programming?Updates weekly on Tuesday. Collapse
LitRPG, Portal Fantasy, Isekai, Dungeons, Male Protagonist, Overpowered Protagonist, High Fantasy, Sword And Magic, Character Growth, Reincarnation, Weak to Strong
Quote: D I A B L OAny poison testers?It's trash
pretty okay so far. i like that the mc is basically trying to make a "magic computer" as a new way to cast magic. he is pretty naive though. he tells basically every secret he knows to the first girl he meets, but im guessing she will be future gf
Behind every magic, there's science
What language does mc use?
Poison tester signing out, this book is officially dog shit
Carlos was an ordinary software engineer on Earth This says literally nothing about what he was doing.
Trash, If I'm not mistaken, the first 15 chp the mc tells someone he just met that he's from another world. (it hadn't even been a day)I remember making a review on Royalroad but the moderators banned it.
Updates weeklyI'm out.
Magic is ProgrammingAny sufficiently advanced science.... is magic
this sounds more like any sufficiently advanced magic is science...
I feel like I have seen a similar novel before… but any thoughts on this?
Rose of white dragon has elements of this like any one with art last an intermidiate level in programming will understand that creating a language or of this air is impossible
OstensibleMammal
In the gutters of New Vultun, the greatest megacity in the world, Avo finds himself resurrected... Read more
In the gutters of New Vultun, the greatest megacity in the world, Avo finds himself resurrected from the clutches of death and tasked with a mission by a father he long thought dead. Now, he must rise to stop the usurpation of reality by the Eight Great Guilds that rule his world. Only by learning from his deaths and grafting newer and greater eldritch gods onto his being can he reach apotheosis and avert certain damnation.Yet, as he ascends to claim the mantle of divinity, a question lingers… what kind of god will he become?…Chapters will usually be around 2.5 to 3k words and updates daily at the present.Declaimer: Expect detailed descriptions of violence, cannibalism, and cursing.Expect: Violence, monster mc, magitech, cyberpunk, implants, atrocities, oppression, non-human protagonist, reality-warping powers, and combined arms warfare.Do not expect: Smut, romance, overt sentimentality.If you develop a sudden outbreak of rash after reading Godclads, it’s not the story. But go see a doctor. Just in case.[Currently increasing releases for the Royal Road Writathon challenge] Collapse
Anti-social Protagonist, Antihero Protagonist, Apocalypse, Artificial Intelligence, Battle Academy, Character Growth, Cruel Characters, Cunning Protagonist, Cyberpunk, Godly Powers, Psychic Powers, Psychopaths, Dystopia, Genetic Modifications, Grimdark, High Fantasy, Magic, Male Protagonist, Mythology, Non-human Protagonist, Post-apocalyptic, Aristocracy, Strategist, Overpowered Protagonist, Futuristic Setting, Urban
In brief: Can appreciate the world building, but the dialogue, characters, their subsequent actions and reasoning scream "modern author" at me, which, of course, isn't a compliment.
What does it mean to be a modern author
Gotta say, this is f#cking Nova!Caught up at chapter 205 right now and I've been hooked for quite a while now.It keeps getting better, at least have been so far.
I don't know why RR authors enjoy making the MC stupid for the lamest of reasons
Excellent stuff
There's an official discord for Godclads https://discord.com/invite/Gg2QyEKPFyAll of it is on Royal Road
Fantastic story, writing and worldbuilding. Very unique. Very immersive.Although the colloquial terms might be confusing at first, they very much add flesh to the dystopian hellscape the story inhabits.Speaking of flesh, this is a very gory story and with a lot of descriptive killing. Def not for the faint of heart.My advice to the less experienced readers struggling with the words: just accept that you don't know what it means and ride it out. Context will define them for you as you continue reading.Also, the first few chapters are tougher to get through and understand than all the rest. Don't worry about that. Just push through till he wakes up clueless and everything will start making sense. The story is very much worth it.As far as writing proficiency and uniqueness on this site, this novel is in a class far above like 95% of everything else.
That is goodRank B(yes it is possible to read very fast ;-;)
To read this novel you have to have a cheat sheet "index" always opened lmaoPpl be reading and deciphering chapters like binary code
You cant have a slang heavy novel right from the start and expect people to shuffle between chapters and index it kills the will to read smh
I read it without index and it was completely fine. Index is more like some additional lore tidbits, and the most important stuff in it gets explained anyway.
Tbh I don’t even know what to rate this especially with the tags, My head is just hurting trying to read this well, ghoul try to think and it’s just painfully hard to try and make him a good Mc because what it seems like happens what the Mc was just a body and he had an a.I in his head to rationalize and order his thoughts but without it he is literally just a ghoul that can think but is absolutely dumb and has no control over his instincts or even think two steps ahead so bad bad novel if you want an Mc with more than one braincell
This is a very difficult question. EITHER I got stupid reading Chinese trash and stopped paying attention to high-quality works, or it's really confusing bullshit.but if someone wants to start reading, it's better from chapter 2, there seems to be a beginning
Immortal_Simo
My name is Tim, or it was until I died. There was no light at the end of the tunnel, no white room... Read more
My name is Tim, or it was until I died. There was no light at the end of the tunnel, no white room to choose any cheats from, nor was there any meeting with God.I didn’t die heroically while saving someone, and I certainly didn’t get hit by a truck. My death was rather stupid and anticlimactic, I had apparently bumped my head while sleeping and passed away…That should have been the end of the road for me, but like many self-proclaimed main characters, I joined the army of multi-dimensional travelers and was reincarnated.Being an avid light novel and manga reader, I would have been excited about the opportunity, if not for my new siblings, who tried to kill me as soon as I was born, or for my mother, who seemed to have a thing for throwing me off cliffs. And let’s not forget my murderous father, who forced me to flatten a small country as my Rite of passage.Oh, did I mention I was reborn as a Dragon? Collapse
Character Growth, Dragons, Fantasy Creatures, Godly Powers, Gods, Gore, Monster Society, Monsters, Mystery Solving, Mythical Beasts, Non-human Protagonist, Non-humanoid Protagonist, Overpowered Protagonist, Reincarnated as a Monster, Sword And Magic
It's not a story about human in dragon body at all. Just a pure dragon who (sometimes) mindlessly follow it instincts. I don't know what the advantage as a reborn person he have when his siblings have the same intelligence as he is.
Great review from Theodepolis, scribblehubReborn as A dragon is a reincarnation story where a man is born into a family of dragons on another world.Plot and Theme: This is an exploration/slice of life/cultivation story based around a dragon's life. There is exploration of the internal landscape, but its minimal. The strength of the story is in its exploration of the world and the social interactions between dragons and other species.Good points: Its refreshing. The author creates an entire world around the story's protagonist. The story doesn't sugarcoat the Dragon Supremacy culture. The ultra rigid society reminds this reader of Sparta: only the strongest and most fit survive. Everyone else is a rival, a source of food, or a pest. Dragons are not human. They don't have human morals. The reader will find brutality but discovery as well. The protagonist might, eventually, have moments of insanity some will confuse with mercy.Bad Points: The prose and style. I kid you not. The prose is something written with no care to style. It is beyond amateur and more than a little lazy. As/while conjunction abuse, rigid structure, telling vs showing, gerunds, bloating (excessive wordiness for simple concepts), lack of significant description, Point of View bouncing, tense slips, passive voice vs active voice, basic orthography, punctuation, etc. In fact, this work doesn't miss a single bump. It holds on to literary problems like an alcoholic to Jack Daniels.1. As/While abuse. As/while subordinate conjunctions are abused in order to speed the narrative along without care for how many times they are repeated. There are other words out there.2. Rigid structure. The style has a general repetitive sentence structure. 'Subordinate conjunction, Independent clause.'Example: "As I thought about what to do, I started yawning." as opposed to "I yawned and considered my options."Feel the weight of the sentence in your head. It isn't pleasant. This particular style controls most of the narrative. It repetition becomes a problem and might put-off many a reader. If something is important enough to be included in a story (subordinate conjunction), it could be separated into its own independent clause (independent clause).3. Gerunds. I won't teach basic creative writing here. Do a search in Google for "Gerunds in prose." Let's just say that the general rule (and all rules are meant to be broken when one knows what they are doing) is to NOT use them. Gerunds, combined with as/while repetition AND subordinate conjunctions are a pain to read.4. PoV problems. Point of Views are tricky. Most fiction is written in 3rd Person Limited PoV or 1st Person PoV. I've seen, rarely, a well conducted 3rd Person Omniscient PoV that slips through with almost no issues.Example: 1st person: I breathed fire. My right claw rended through eldritch flesh.Example: 3rd Person Limited: Terrac breathed fire. His right claw cleaved through eldritch flesh.Example: 3rd Person Omniscient (Multiple views) : Terrac breathed fire (1). The eldritch horror was terrified (2 and Telling). Sparky the dog wanted to pee (3), but he barked at both the dragon and the eldritch horror with brave stupidity. Unknown to all three of them (Sub conjunction), the loss of any of them would disrupt reality. (Ind. Clause). (God/Author PoV)An author must try to limit 3rd Person Omniscient to subtle shifts, otherwise it feels clumsy and harms a story's pacing.5. Telling vs showing. Yes the story has this problem in spades. Telling is direct and (if not given enough thought) lazy. Showing is INDIRECT. It is also, in most cases, wordier but builds better, flows better.Example Telling: Adeline was cold.Example showing: Adeline shivered.Example showing with details: Adeline shivered despite the heavy winter coat.6. Began to. Started to. Seems to. Appears to. I might despise As/while subordinate conjunction abuse but "began/started to/seems to" bloating and ambiguity is up there. These phrases are used by authors to organize their thoughts. They are unnecessary preambles to other clauses in a sentence. Remove them from the prose except in specific contexts.Example: Terrac began to consider the possibilities of murder as Arnold rambled on, convinced of his own importance.Example WITHOUT the bullcrap: Arnold rambled on, convinced of his own importance. Terrac pondered abject murder.Notice that I used 3rd Person omniscient, but it feels like 3rd Person limited. Terrac observing Arnold. That's subtle manipulation of prose and style. Notice that I removed the as/while conjunction. Notice that the "Began to" preamble is gone. Notice that I am TELLING instead of Showing, but the prose isn't harmed by the choice because one sentence has long phonetic prosody and the other is short and to the point. More importantly, the details provide an understanding of the characters and aren't boring. One is a snotty jackarse. The other might be a snarky SoB or, in truth, a cold blooded murderer. I don't have the patience to detail examples of all the other problems in this work. This isn't a creative writing class. Let's leave this at the point that I am EXTREMELY displeased with the rough prose because the story has great potential. This work can be much, much better.2.5 / 5 stars. Fifty percent. Not high enough to be average, not low enough for complete anonimity.
Amazing review are u a writer or something? If you are I'm interested in reading you work ?.
Not mine my intellect is too low for that xD, I've written whose it is on top of the comment
It is identical to Dragon Who Controls Time
I like mc who are in control of their own action, here mc seems to be heavily influnenced by his instinct so much so that his past life as human have little to no effect. It could just be a stroy of normal dragon and say they gain sentient at birth which would've been more interesting.
I've been seeing many new novels becoming a dragon idk why? Is it a trend now?
It’s always been a trend
True that
Chinese obsession with dragon is as old as japanese obsession with tantacles, american obsession with guns, indian obsession with cow, korean obsession with little sisters.
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the korean one is more sus than japanese ?
Very sus.
Oh shit the last one caught me off guard lmao
Are you the embodiment of knowledge and wisdom?
Quote: DeathseekerNot to worry I found itImmortal_Simo27 days agoNope, as mentioned there, that story is just a draft I already written before Dragon. I’m not working on it now, but merely posting old chapters. Everything is on pause since I’m in the process of moving to another country.Author will posting soon as per above message as someone asked about the new chapter in offical site#argus234#
6/10 above avgAverage score in writing in every front across the board except one. Pacing is done relatively well. However the consistent avg writing has its own charm as this put more enphasis on the story contents instead of tasteless gripes.
Don't know why. But the author flipped the MCs character 180, seeing humans as cancer to be terminated to saying the humans were salvageable race and they have great potential. Like motherf#cker what kind of drugs are on to say that. We're literally killing our own planet, who the humans stays at the top of the food chain. Although can't blame the author for change the way he did a lot of cunts were bitching and moaning about how's the MCs a ungrateful bitch for not putting the humans race on a pedestal in comments. Like just why.....just why. Sigh.........
mcs only a few years old and thats coming from a long lived race, thoughts turn in a dime; perpective constantly rearranging. Some may call it growth but i think its better apt to say mcs perspective has yet to settle.his previous life memory only serves to confuse him, as its made clear he rather abandones them naturally and fully embrace exploration of his current life and priveleges.eg. near the beginning he was taught through circumstance, body language, and attitude that dragons are the best and above everything else by his father and grandfatgers influence. When he meets his grandmother he realize this thought isnt the same for all dragons so his limiter was released and ask himself what he truely thinks. He proceeded in exploring and dropped the heavy emphasis perspective on any particular race and begins to evaluate them himself in a clean slate.
Hello, dragons have bloodline inheritance age is just a number for them
yes but here we talk about the practical execution of both inheritance and maturity for a dragon~Or do we all assume a pop and all young dragons knows the secret of the world immediately and start acting like adult Yodas?Everything has a process, even magic in books. only thing that doesnt have processes is descriptions and anything that happens in cn cultivation novels
The MC is just a human in a Dragon form. At first he was like 'dragons are supreme and above all', but suddenly, after just a few line of dialogue with his grandma, he does a complete 180. He showed no signs of regret or guilt (after wiping out a whole kingdom), or at least not enough to justify the sudden flip in opinion. I guess this is as generic as it gets. 7.5/10
Finally a good/great dragon novel where mc isnt instantly turned into human form power but has a permament dragon from ch 1 to ch 187 with a decent level storyline but it doesnt update
Do you know what happened to updates
Not a clue
Not to worry I found itImmortal_Simo27 days agoNope, as mentioned there, that story is just a draft I already written before Dragon. I’m not working on it now, but merely posting old chapters. Everything is on pause since I’m in the process of moving to another country.Author will posting soon as per above message as someone asked about the new chapter in offical site
Viva01
The world of pokemon is synonymous with young boys and girls going on a journey and facing many... Read more
The world of pokemon is synonymous with young boys and girls going on a journey and facing many challenges. This story is not like that. This story is about a SI coming into one of the most prominent companions of the pokemon world. Unlike other stories, Brock is already established and has gone on his journey. He's faced challenges and returned home to be other people's challenges. Which, there's a lot more to than most people realise.Explore an alternate pokemon universe with an expanded cast and more mature ideals through the eyes of Brock, Gym Leader to Pewter City Gym, and family man. Collapse
Fanfiction, Pokemon, Male Protagonist, Weak to Strong
Yes, just yes.This is such a breath of fresh air. I've read some of the Pokemon stories here to try something different from the usual regressing/transmigrating/reincarnating/cultivation/fantasy novels that have filled my story library. But when they try to make them realistic they often miss the mark significantly and ruin it.But this... This is a well thought love song to the Pokemon world. It blends reality seamlessly into the original charm so that it feels like it comes to life. It's got enough of the gritty side to be just realistic enough to pull off the warm environment evoked by the setting.There is romance, at first it seems like it might be a harem but no, his significant other is not going to be permitting that in just the perfect hint of Yandere fashion appropriate to her character.The MC isn't perfect, but in spite of that he is well enough written that it just feels appropriate without becoming annoying and you can really taste how the transmigrator blended into Brock's original personality.Do yourself a favor, give it a read, it's worth the time spent at least to the current posted chapter 159.
whOA! oh wow, a sincere review? of a decent fanfic?! what happend?
It's really good. Though for me personally, I didnt like it that MC was brock because it messes up lots of things for the anime plot, A rock type specialist isnt my cup of tea either. Story Development- there really isnt much I think. The novel starts when Brock has already established himself, even becoming stronger than champion Lance. Well, his family drama did make it more interesting. Characters- The characters are well thought of. It gives more substance. Even the new brock, just the new personality he has made it interesting. Though I wasnt that much excited because Im not very much interested on a rock type specialist, I still think its very awesome. I hope though that in this story, he doesnt go travelling with Ash. If possible, he travels alone and strengthen his pokemon more because theres so much potential in this story. Wished i could read more. I give it a 4.7/5
Story Development: A 4/5 only because the Background of the World, Quality of Writing and Characters improve it from a 3.5/5. The Story Dev. is eh. It's not slow nor fast but given that this was only published here 28 days ago the Story Development will be slow. Writing Quality: Only thing I can really say is too many words that I forget what's what. Besides that a solid 4/5 at the bare minimum.World Background: Its Pokémon. The rating is whatever you think it is.Character Design: Well...it's Pokémon cant say much about that. So same as above I guess? I do like how we don't start at the beginning of MC's life and rather....maybe almost a year or 2 behind canon? Not to sure about the time but it should be around thereTidbits: I do like how somewhat early on we can see how the MC has affected the world. Plus the relationship MC and Sabrina has is wholesome asf. I SWEAR TO GOD IF THEY DONT GET TOGETHER DESPITE THE AUTHOR CLEARLY DOING THAT
WHY, everyone of these stories coming out of the fanfiction genre has people taking over characters in the series. If you are a fan of these series as the authors portray themselves as CREATE A DAMN OC. They need to stop f#cking up all these series.
Actually, it's a very nice take on Brock's life, how he is to be a Gym Leader, sibling/father of 9 others, an engine for his town, a great trainer, and still find his own place in it all.This Brock is intelligent, not lustful, is realistically a great trainer and gym leader, and a caregiving father figure. So I think the character has been chosen well for this story, nowhere else in Pokemon do you have a character so good to write about, so rich in backstory. The anime just failed him. Here is his rightful story.
Yeah sure but this is interesting is it not? We're not reading MC as Ash any other characters. We're reading MC as Brock a popular and cool character from the Pokémon Franchise. It's interesting to see how everything will play out as MC has knowledgeable of the Games( Strategies and what not), Animes, and the Comics. This also takes place a year or 2 before canon meaning we're in the middle of MC's life which is new
I find the story very enjoyable because it is written well and has an interesting concept of him being a gym leader. The chapters are long and thought out with characters being built up and emotions seeming logical.Thing some people may not like are he has already developed a bit and it takes place after he has already caught a lot of pokemon. He is not really op and their also doesn’t seem to be any R-18 if that is your thing.For a pokemon fanfic its a good one but im not to far yet so it may get worse
I pretty much agree with what this guy said.You can nitpick some stuff about it. For example, there's some power fantasy around the edges, and there's some uneven pacing at parts, but overall its a fun read.I rate it 5 outta 5.
Kewl.
Lise Eclaire
After his first college party, Dallion woke up in a small room without doors or windows. Next thing... Read more
After his first college party, Dallion woke up in a small room without doors or windows. Next thing he knew, he woke up as an “awakened” in a small medieval village in the middle of nowhere. Now all he needs to do is figure what the heck is going on. And what’s the big deal with being awakened anyway?! Collapse
Fantasy World, Level System, Male Protagonist, Strong to Stronger, Sword And Magic, Weak to Strong, LitRPG
Quote: Stomper621Haven't read it myself, but i went to RoyalRoad to read the reviews of it.Summed up: - Magic System is interesting and the author focuses on that a lot.- MC is really bland and an idiot. He makes tons of stupid decisions that make no sense. Horrible deals with no benefit at all, and takes massive risks for no reason.- Seems to not have proper scaling for power. (Apparently a "weak" awakened was able to mind control an entire village, including the MC easily. And it seems that a lot of people have this same "weak" ability, including the MC.All in all, the reviews were decent. Most said that the author focuses on the System and such and that it is interesting. But most complaints were about the MC being an idiot and the plot armor was too much.
booooooring
Who the f#ck reads this ?!? Wtf
Well We Have An Idiot And Foolish Mc......I Tried Reading It At Royal Road But Gave Up.... Despite Mc Being From Earth He To Foolish...I Don't Know How People Read This Novel Up To Chapter 500
Haven't read it myself, but i went to RoyalRoad to read the reviews of it.Summed up: - Magic System is interesting and the author focuses on that a lot.- MC is really bland and an idiot. He makes tons of stupid decisions that make no sense. Horrible deals with no benefit at all, and takes massive risks for no reason.- Seems to not have proper scaling for power. (Apparently a "weak" awakened was able to mind control an entire village, including the MC easily. And it seems that a lot of people have this same "weak" ability, including the MC.All in all, the reviews were decent. Most said that the author focuses on the System and such and that it is interesting. But most complaints were about the MC being an idiot and the plot armor was too much.
System is goodWorld is goodCharcters are shit
Heheheh.... synopsis really is true it's a trash........
Why is the synopsis for all these new novels trash? They just make me not even want to read the novel.
True
Actus
Everybody wants a second shot at life. Many get it - chosen by roaming angels and sent off to... Read more
Everybody wants a second shot at life. Many get it - chosen by roaming angels and sent off to another word full of magic and cultivation, where they can live in ways that could only be dreamed of on earth. Where the only thing that dictated their fate was power. Anyone that met Chance would have agreed that he deserved it more than most.Life isn't that easy. Just like everything else, there are rules and regulations - and Chance didn't make the cut. Not until a lucky encounter gets him a one-way ticket to his future. A world where he can make something of himself. If only Chance hadn't landed in the middle of an endless maze full of monsters salivating for his life. Isolated and lost, the only thing he has to work with is his strange, luck based magic and his determination to finally live a life worth living. Fortunately, he has a whole lot of good Karma built up. Collapse
Battle Academy, Cultivation, Demons, Fast Cultivation, Fast Learner, Magic, Monsters, Overpowered Protagonist, Strong to Stronger, Unique Cultivation Technique, Male Protagonist, Karma
#panic# chapters are only 30 but they are repeated.. please remove duplicate chapters
Thanks!
Rank: B
What is the prerequisite to being a protagonist?Is it Luck?Of course it is. A protagonist wouldn't be a protagonist if he didn't have the plot Armor the thickness of the KfE bank vault.Gleam brings us the MC whose literal power is luck because he ate Cheetos, ...wait, what?!How do you kill your enemies?By making the misfortune befall upon them. Kinda reminds me of Evernight Goddess from LOTM.The MC here is not an Anti-hero type character, in fact he is rather kind and...nice.That's why it's called Karma Cultivator Isekai. MC literally earned a hit from the truck-kun by being nice to Bob, oh, you don't Bob, you will find out real soon.Both the style and grammar is solid. Side characters are great with solid personalities, distinct motives and world building is still in its infancy, so I can't say much there.Actus is a RR author, whose best works are Monster Chef, Steamforged Sorcery and My Best friend is an Eldritch Horror, all of which are currently available on Amazon and Kindle, so as a experienced writer you can rest assured that the book won't be put on hiatus midway.Anyway, this a good read in my opinion 4.3/5So give it a try.
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Becoming a wizard is something that Jerry must attain in order to survive in his new life, and that... Read more
Becoming a wizard is something that Jerry must attain in order to survive in his new life, and that is living in the Marvel World. There would be a greater threat coming to earth, and he needs a way to prepare for that.Fortunately, he was given a System that allowed him to go to the Harry Potter Universe, where he got a letter that he would be enrolling in Hogwarts.Jerry needed to learn a lot of things from Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry and, perhaps prevent such incoming threats in the future with the knowledge and skills that he learned from there? Collapse
Academy, Age Progression, Alchemy, Alternate World, Anti-Magic, Based on a Movie, Calm Protagonist, Caring Protagonist, Character Growth, Cheats, Child Protagonist, Confident Protagonist, Elemental Magic, Fanfiction, Fantasy Creatures, Fantasy World, Fast Learner, Grinding, Heroes, Hidden Abilities, Hiding True Abilities, Hiding True Identity, Magic, Magic Beasts, Male Protagonist, Monsters, Multiple Identities, Mythical Beasts, Overpowered Protagonist, Previous Life Talent, Reincarnated in Another World, Saving the World, Special Abilities, Strong to Stronger, Summoning Magic, Transformation Ability, Transported to Another World, Weak to Strong, Witches, Wizards, World Hopping, World Travel, God Protagonist, Godly Powers, Harry Potter, Interdimensional Travel, Late Romance, Marvel, Righteous Protagonist, Ruthless Protagonist, System
I am currently on chapter 242 .So far I have enjoyed reading this novel. It is not a masterpiece and the quality is quite average, however, it has been really good to me me now that I can't find anything to read, and it reminds me a lot of when I started my journey in Webnovels, this novel gives me a feeling of freshness. :D
Why!? Why do people combine things that DON'T NEED TO BE COMBINED
Well, let's get started with this review. First of all, I would like to point out that I will not talk about the quality of the text or its spelling. My level of English is mediocre and I rely on my friend Google to translate. So I'm the last person who can criticize this kind of thing. I will only speak here about my opinion of the story. We therefore follow Jerry in the Marvel world having a system which allows him to travel to several worlds (HP being simply the first of them). This is a decent fanfiction for those new to the genre or if you want to pass the time. But let's look for what I think are flaws for the pickiest among you.The MC gets strong too fast. Indeed Jerry will travel to several worlds, but each of these worlds will be too weak to constitute a real threat to him. Moreover, many of these worlds are not very interesting.Magic not exploited enough. The MC initially has HP magic, one of the most malleable among the magical universes. I expected more innovation in his magic spells. Too bad that most of the time he just copies existing spells. Magic is as versatile as technology, it's a shame not to exploit this potential.A poorly operated system. The system has no problem in itself, just that it is poorly used by the author. Indeed, the system of this novel simply aims at dimensional transport between different worlds, but also the possibility of consuming points (called Stars in the book) to facilitate the learning of magic. The problem here is that the MC only uses his points when reading books, making Jerry's progress boring to follow. I can't repeat it enough, but in a novel whose theme is the increase in strength of its MC, you have to make his way of progressing in strength interesting to read. For example, between an MC who only reads magic books to become stronger and an MC who must research magic to become stronger, we guess which one is more interesting to follow.A fishtail ending. I understand that Jerry becomes too strong at the end so that it is no longer interesting to follow him having adventures like this. But this is not an excuse to botch an ending. The author could have given us the identity of the person who gave the system to Jerry, there is no need to experience adventure for that. It feels like the author cut the story short before it was finished. Now let's talk about the last problem, a recurring problem with most fanfiction, at least that's my opinion. I'm taking advantage of my review here to talk about it:The MC's personality is not suited to the work used in the fanfiction. Let me explain, there are several types of MC, the selfish, the vigilant, the cheeky, the lazy, the cautious, ... In short, there is no shortage of types. In normal novels, the personality of the MC is adapted to his universe (For example a selfish MC will tend to live in a world where the majority is selfish, the most obvious example are Chinese martial arts novels where everyone world is selfish).But fanfiction works differently. The world used in a fanfiction does not belong to the author. So in principle the author of a fanfiction must adapt the MC personality to the type of universe borrowed in his story. For example, take the world of the anime Fairy Tail, it's a story that promotes friendship and family. If you put a selfish MC in that kind of world, he'll be a stain. Faced with Fairy Tail characters who act out of justice and friendship, an MC who only acts out of profit will seem petty compared to them. And a fan fiction reader will make this comparison unconsciously, and will end up not liking the MC.In addition to seeming petty, this will create a barrier between the MC and the world characters used in the fanfiction. This time let's take the example of Jerry in the Marvel universe. Jerry and a selfish MC type, although he can easily help in a situation, he will rarely do so without being able to gain something in return or if it doesn't earn a star for his system. Result, in a universe where each hero acts in the name of justice, we have Jerry who only acts for profit, he does not save others out of kindness, but only because it benefits him. So, no matter how badass and powerful Jerry is, we compare him to characters like Iron Man, Thor or Captain America, who are weaker, but who are full of ideals and who save others without asking for anything in return. , Jerry comes across as a mean-spirited cheapskate with a narrow view of the world. In short, we are not particularly attached to him. I therefore find that Jerry's personality is not suited to this fanfiction, which I find a shame. In conclusion, a decent fanfiction for those who can accept some imperfection. I think it's an ideal novel to pass the time when you have nothing left to read. I hope I have enlightened you, wishing you a good reading. (I would like to point out that I read the entire novel on another site, so this review was written after my full reading.)
3/10 grammer is mid author only has half baked knowledged on EVERYTHING marvel half backed harry potter half baked everything makes up shit all the time the red stars he uses are inconsistent uses a few hundred each day for and gains hundreds of thousands and yet still somehow runs out 246 chapters in barely anything substantial other then predetirmined shit that everyone knows is gonna happen since its a ff it just sucks
why combine things? Harry Potter is not a part of Marvel
I lifted the levitation spell I gave up on reading this crap after seeing this.
What how's that possible
It not half bad
Fu#k it,imma read this It'll probably make me sick,but i will still be reading and sick
NVM,i'm out
Is there no romance in this ?? If not it'd be kinda boring I think!??
There is a short romance later, but not very important.
MC is simping for the know-it-all sl*t. I've dropped it there.
Thanks for the warning. Can you recommend a novel with a MC that is not naive or a simp/cuck?
Hp is so overused bruh
Last time I've heard, it's the most "fan-fictioned" fiction ever.
it is. But there are a few diamonds in the rough.
Halosty
Anton is a great-grandfather. He is living quite a happy life, despite his advanced age and... Read more
Anton is a great-grandfather. He is living quite a happy life, despite his advanced age and declining health… until a group of cultivator bandits moves into the area. The nearby guardians of the area, the Order of Ninety-Nine Stars, are unable to track them down as they continue to ravage nearby towns. During one desperate winter Anton is out on a hunt when his family- his entire village- is killed or taken as slaves by the bandits. He lacks the strength to fight them, and he wasn’t even present for their arrival to die with his loved ones. At the pit of his despair, he wonders if he ever had any chance to change things. What could he even do? He cannot even pull his best bow, and his eyesight is failing. If he had been a cultivator… perhaps there might have been a chance, but he was decades- perhaps even most of his life- too late.***Notes on cultivation levels:There are five general stages of cultivation, though the fifth is extremely rare. Each cultivation style might have their own name for the stages.1. Body Tempering2. Spirit Building/ occasionally System Creation (Ninety-Nine Stars)3. Constellation Formation (Ninety-Nine Stars)4. Life Transformation/Galaxy Construction (Ninety-Nine Stars)5. Ascension Collapse
Male Protagonist, Overpowered Protagonist, Weak to Strong, Sects, Body Tempering, Eastern Setting, Death of Loved Ones
I liked the story, it being different from the young masters and reincarnators, even from old school 'I found/inherited a wise old man in a ring'.A old dude, knowing most his family is lost and willing to die to get his grandkids back, and keep them safe.Though, it gets weird after people start ascending.
the use of past and present tense in the synopsis already keeps me away, feels like it'd be another Primordial Cultivator where everything is present tense even when it makes no sense. Anton is a great-grandfather. He is living quite a happy life, despite his advanced age and declining health… until a group of cultivator bandits moves into the area.I seriously can't fathom why you would use present tense when recounting something that has happened in the past...
Rank: C+
No joke, I read the name of the book and thought it was going to be about someone/something/some-group/some-system which cultivates elders… like it takes people and turns them into elders… slightly disappointed that it’s not
Who wants to read about an antique struggling to cultivate?
So you’d rather read about a kid struggling to cultivate or an antique reincarnated into a kid’s body?
You've got a point. That's why I stopped reading about all the dao brothers entirely. Especially the young horny waste of spaces.
Meh... It's ok I guess.The writing is good, but I can't feel close to the protagonist. I read like 140+ chaps and i got bored later.The cultivation system is different and interesting.Maybe he might get some change in his character and idk when/how.Mc wants to stop slavery and bring in a change to his world. He was already 100 before cultivating and he gained few years after breaking through few levels but decided to burn it by using some forbidden technique ? but still fast enough than others in cultivation.If someone read more chaps than me they could fill you in better of how's the novel.
Who would actually want to read something like this?
Username checks out.
Its average. Not great not terrible. The MC being old is not really that important as he acts like someone much younger that he should be. Try it if you have the time othewise don't go out of your way to read it.
This is the only reason you need to not read it.You did not get wise elderly mc.Its still a young man behaviour, the author gimmicks doesnt work
achei a bem legal e diferente... meio que me senti triste em algumas partes....
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UnstoppableJuggernaut
After his parents died, Alex Roth had a plan: become a wizard. Through hard work, he was accepted... Read more
After his parents died, Alex Roth had a plan: become a wizard. Through hard work, he was accepted into the world’s greatest university of wizardry—but fate had another plan.On his eighteenth, he is marked as one of his kingdom’s five Heroes, chosen to fight the land’s great enemy. But his brand is 'The Fool', worst of the marks.Rather than die or serve the other Heroes like Fools in the past, he packs up his little sister, his childhood friend and her cerberus, then flees for the university in hope of refuge, magic and to unravel the truth about his land’s evil.There’s one small problem: The Mark tries to ruin magic while enhancing skills outside of divinity, combat and spellcraft.……that is, unless he can learn to exploit the hell out of it.*****This the first time I am writing a web novel type story, and I hope you like it. I like progression stories and I've always wanted to try and write one like a few of the web novels that inspired me.Updates Tues-Wed-Thur-Fri-Sat.There are currently 20 advanced chapters on my patreon as a thank you to patrons.Join us on discord! https://discord.gg/A4M3CzfWBnChapters will be roughly 2000-2500 words.[participant in the Royal Road Writathon challenge]***Rating: This story is kind of like a PG-13 movie. There'll be gore and some swearing but not much beyond that. If that changes, I'll warn you. Tone: Tone will be a mix of some action-adventure with excitement, comedy, slice of life elements and mystery. I won't be going too dark with this story. There will be mentions of war, some death, grief and violence.MC: MC is analytical/rational with emotions. He is mostly in control of those emotions. MC will progress in power, eventually becoming very strong. When that happens, I'll add the Strong Lead tag.Fights: Fights will be detailed.***Stuff this story won't have:- Extreme grimdark content- Murderhobo plots- Edgy, anti-hero MC - Pacifist MC- Harems Collapse
Male Protagonist, Weak to Strong, Academy, Strategist, Age Progression, Magic, Game Elements, LitRPG
It's not bad, but it's not good either, it's average at best. It's a 5/10
praise mr fool!!
Guess he's expanding on the Sefirah domain, praise Mr. Fool indeed
hes expanding his influence to other novels
Rank: C-
Novel is so so, nothing to brag about. I had to ignore some of MC's decision making and constant plot armor to even continue reading. His university life is pretty boring, so if you skipped a couple chapters here and there you wouldn't really be missing anything. There's a few things I have a beef with. MC should never have brought his 10yr old sister with him. Leaving her with the Lu family is the most reasonable and safer route. MC has been in a lot of life and death situations but when he gets interrogated by authorities his cool and calm attitude is gone, and reverts back to your average wimpy 19yr old. The only good trait about MC is he puts in the work.
As of chapter 330The characters are well done, story is great but a slow burn for major stuff which isn't bad, romance is believable and the mc is realistic.The MCs blessing has upsides but its downsides are near crippling and he has to find ways around it to be able to fight at all.SpoilerMC seems to have an advantage with summoning magic for reasons not yet divulged, only thing I found grating but hopefully they have decent reasoning behind it.
can we get a solid review here up to 300+ chaps?
It's pretty decent, a cut above average western novels and is definitely a cut above the average cn web novel (to anyone with an opinion, before you express it, remember that there is simply MORE cn web novels both in title and in length and I hope you understand how average works)
Noice
this is some grade A shit
does that mean good or bad ?
Good oof lol
Is it me or the tag 'game elements' is wrongly included in the novel tags? I haven't seen status screen or something similar to it in the novel.
Encontrou algo que faça parte da TAG litrpg?
Im in ch 19 as of now i like this one. Im tires of the ones where the mc does everything effortlessly like a mary sue. The mc here does fail a bit, is scared when facing monsters . The world building is nice. this is a 4/5 for mebe reading on ahead. lets see how it goes.
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